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AS LOVE FLOWS Long back full youth flourished abloom Bud of love peeped through core of compassion Folded petals yet to blossom, on romantic aroma of passion. Mr. Hesitant met Miss Shy. Both liked each other but thought long to wait. Wobbling time idly passing by. to decide and approach to fix First Date? Then, lovely red rose smiled to claim bubbling blood to flood on quiet Miss Shy. Mr. Hesitant not to blame. Two eager hearts accepted social tie. Days rolling on love and rapture turning chapter of ancient history. Couple unable to capture amour forever, but reached expiry. 02/06/16 Second Place 'What Your Poem Needs Now...... Contest by Michelle Faulkner Re-edited on 02/16/20 First Place 'STRAND SELECT Q' contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/10/2018 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Anisha.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/11/2018 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Line. Love
Date: 10/9/2018 9:00:00 PM
A good one...yet another common path taken by love
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/11/2018 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Debjani. Love
Date: 10/9/2018 6:55:00 PM
I loved the story of 'Miss Shy and Mr Hesitant' thanks for entering my contest!
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:51:00 PM
What a wonderful poem so glad I stopped to read. Cheers!
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:56:00 AM
Nice one....
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/7/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Chitra

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