Love

AS LOVE FLOWS

                 Long back full youth flourished abloom
                  Bud of love peeped through core of compassion
                   Folded petals yet to blossom,
                    on romantic aroma of passion.

                 Mr. Hesitant met Miss Shy.
                Both liked each other but thought long to wait.
                 Wobbling time idly passing by.
              to decide and approach to fix First Date?  
                   
               Then, lovely red rose smiled to claim
                  bubbling blood to flood on quiet Miss Shy.
                    Mr. Hesitant not to blame. 
                Two eager hearts accepted social tie.

                   Days rolling on love and rapture
                   turning chapter of ancient history.
                     Couple unable to capture
                      amour forever, but reached expiry. 
                                                                                                                                        02/06/16
                    
         Second Place   
    'What Your Poem Needs Now...... Contest by Michelle Faulkner

  Re-edited on 02/16/20

                                    First Place
 'STRAND SELECT Q'  contest by Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Congrats on your win, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 12:19 AM
Thanks Line. Love
Mitra Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 9:00 PM
A good one...yet another common path taken by love
Dutta Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 12:20 AM
Thanks Debjani. Love
Faulkner Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 6:55 PM
I loved the story of 'Miss Shy and Mr Hesitant' thanks for entering my contest!
Konos Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 3:51 PM
What a wonderful poem so glad I stopped to read. Cheers!
Rao Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Nice one....
Dutta Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Chitra
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