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- Just Be Grateful -

Praying for the day I meet heaven You being there sharing this moment In paradise here I come with open arms Listening to the song of a magical lullaby I will bathe in your teardrops love That special place drowns in a sea of roses Kissing gently the eyes that they fall from Our time must flow in ceaseless praise Salted everyone in your deep beauty shines amazing grace A piece of your heart's dreams fantasies and love sails away in a treasure pearl Spices of the soul I surrender to your drops Falling from a great height like summer rain All of the things that make us who we are Softly as they run a river gently down the face Unrhymed tercet Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 08.08.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 8/21/2015 2:39:00 AM

A beautiful collaboration indeed, Liam and Ann Lise ;)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/20/2015 4:33:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Ann Lise!A very beautiful,dreamy,captivating love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling! A little sad but so very beautifully written.An excellent piece!A very beautiful,enchanting and romantic sweet loving piece to be held very close to my heart.Great imagery!I love it!Just awesome!Fantastic collaboration!Your pens are mighty golden!A 7 to each + Fav!Keep your Faith, Liam!I hope that you're feeling better.Sending you prayers.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2015 3:51:00 PM

Beautiful the two of you! Tears are a language God understands....Lovely piece. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2015 2:48:00 PM

- I've thought a lot about how short life is, the last two weeks :) - We have much to be grateful for - Thank you my friend, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 2:22:00 PM

I remember reading this when Anne lise posted it Liam an exceptional write my friends:-) hugs Jan xx 7