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- I Have Lost My P -

I`m not ha_ _y today No I`m quite sad and u_set Sitting here with my cold sou_ and an old s_oon I have s_ent too much money,and feel _oor I have not _earls or diamonds,that`s not why I`m sad and u_set As I sit here with my su_ _ er and my cold sou_ thinking about what I do without my _? Dreams returns to ha_ _y days, when I _layed _iano and had _eace in my mind What shall I do without my _ ? _ is im_ortant in my life I`ve lost my _ I can no longer wish to you: Ha_ _y birthday Have a ha_ _y weekend Ha_ _ y for you. Ha_ _ y to see you Ha _ _y new year .......... I do not want _iano,_earl or diamonds.... I want my _ back. 05.01.2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/12/2021 9:04:00 AM
Really enjoyed this read
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Date: 9/6/2021 5:35:00 AM
What a fun write. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/20/2014 5:56:00 AM
Thought provoking... inspiring... not just the loss of a letter... the loss of many things... hmmmm Thanks... PR
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 8:08:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting .... and comments my _oem today, Pernell. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2012 10:43:00 AM
This poem is original. I'm still laughing over the sulfur smell - those boiled eggs you were trying to pass off on your grand daughter.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2012 10:48:00 AM
Peggy, thank you for visit "the old one" - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/12/2012 3:24:00 PM
Bravo!! This gave me a much needed smile today. Thank you.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2012 3:29:00 PM
Frank, thank you for smile, visit and comments my _oem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/28/2012 7:31:00 AM
Great _oem... I always try to take care of my 'p's and 'q's... By the way, my guitars don't hang, they float on the walls! And, thanks for your kind words... Terry
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2012 7:35:00 AM
Terry, thank you for visit and comments my _oem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/11/2012 10:18:00 AM
Absolutely love the originality of this. If you read Awe Shucks and The Life of a Poem you will see that I embrace the fact that all poetry is not about love, saddness, death and our dear Lord.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2012 10:25:00 AM
I agree in the last line Terry. Thank you for visit my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/21/2012 5:44:00 PM
Hi Anne - I hope you have found your p by the time you read this! You are funny and original! - Gail
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2012 3:10:00 AM
P-P-P-P-P - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Gail - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 2/27/2012 4:18:00 PM
Creative oem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2012 1:55:00 AM
Thank you Vince for reading my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 2/8/2012 4:08:00 AM
Clever. You can make a poem out of anything, Girl!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/8/2012 6:06:00 AM
Thank you E.J. for reading my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 2/1/2012 8:57:00 AM
guess ur _ is indis_ensable to saving ur breath... lol. such a _leasant _iece... hope you'll find ur _ back to wish me gud on my b'day: 7th February...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2012 10:27:00 AM
:)smile.....Thank you for reading my poem Angel. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/31/2012 10:11:00 AM
It's hard to imagine the day without your _ especially in the morning.. Quite creative
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2012 10:36:00 AM
Thank you for reading it - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/30/2012 2:19:00 PM
I love this _iece Anne-Lise :) it's _erfect.
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Peter for reading it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/30/2012 8:32:00 AM
Cute!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/30/2012 9:49:00 AM
Thank you!!!oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/28/2012 7:34:00 AM
Anne Lise -- Lovely mourning of your _. Who thought you can write without it? Kathy
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2012 7:52:00 AM
The: P.P.P.P.P. - IS BACK- Kathy,thank you for reading it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/25/2012 12:19:00 AM
is this for matt's contest??.. grreat concept and write..PLEASE READ MY LATEST BLOG, ANNE..IMPORTANT!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2012 2:18:00 AM
No it is not for a contest Nette.oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/21/2012 9:18:00 AM
Anne Lise, the title caught my eye and I was not disappointed, lovely unique stuff there. Unless my math is whacked you had 473 views (and counting) in the 16 days since it was posted, WOW! I also read many more of your offerings today and I'm very glad I did. I will be back, that is for sure. All the best JT
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2012 11:11:00 AM
You are welcome back John!Thank you fro reading my _oem. oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/21/2012 8:32:00 AM
What a wonderful poem. I feel your sense of loss -- but written very cleverly. thanks for commenting on my poem!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2012 11:08:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem Don. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 1/18/2012 10:01:00 AM
I would be so terribly LOST without my P also, Anne..I better start taking better care of her..she might feel a little neglected because the letter I keeps getting center stage...I know..I am soooo selfish..haha. I love this..Great write. Gwendolen
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2012 11:43:00 AM
It ok. :) thank you for reading it.oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/17/2012 4:09:00 PM
love it love it great fun here
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2012 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Don.oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/16/2012 10:36:00 PM
ha ha ha... imagine no diamonds... love it... where's my p's.... love you _oem.... ha ha...p.d.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2012 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for :) smiling p.d!!oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/16/2012 7:39:00 AM
Your a nut, but you made me smile:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2012 10:54:00 AM
Good.. you smile, Dave :) :)Anne-Lise
Date: 1/15/2012 7:36:00 PM
what a GREAT idea for a poem. LOVE it. you are a very Ha y girl!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2012 3:15:00 AM
Thank you Andrea,yes I am ha__y.oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 1/15/2012 12:43:00 PM
Well as you know P is an important letter to me. ha ha I will never play piano or have pearls and never many pennies but I do have poetry. Cute write. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2012 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for reeding it.oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 1/14/2012 11:43:00 PM
Anne.....I have poems buried expressing these same thoughts....I write poems. like you.....to survive....jimbo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2012 4:37:00 AM
Thank you James.oxox Anne-Lise
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