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A pleasant evening Romantic streets in Paris Killed, done in cold blood Picture as warzone Music stops and ball rolling A nightmares in live The death in Paris Fire with assault rifle France close its borders * * * * * * * * * * * * * A definition of evil: Goodness absence - No compassion Are some people born without heart and becomes obsessed with the power of evil ? Fear and crying Gurgling stream of hate My pain for the world Give me your hand Always by your side 14.11.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/27/2015 11:38:00 AM

A sad world when there is hate and intolerance. Nicely done. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2015 12:43:00 PM

- And the whole world is in mourning ....... when will this stop - Thanks for comments and visits, dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 11/23/2015 3:58:00 PM

Captured in words sans pain or blood.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2015 2:14:00 AM

- Thanks for comments and visits, Iris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/20/2015 10:16:00 AM

Very sad and it's a blame and shame to humanity. i feel something sometimes that it will take another 10000 years for the world as a whole to touch the perfect level of humanity. God bless all the good people of the world. Invaluable dedication. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 12:17:00 PM

- 10 000 years ......is an eternity, dear friend Bl !!!!! - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/19/2015 10:30:00 AM

A very nice dedication of solidarity to the lovely city of Paris in these dark times for them.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2015 1:04:00 PM

- A mourning time for really many people across the world, Carol - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/18/2015 1:22:00 AM

Very very nice Anna Lisaeven though the subject is sad. 7 for sure :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2015 2:41:00 AM

- Thanks Debbie, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/17/2015 6:17:00 AM

Sad to see all that took place in Paris. Your haiku is a great heartfelt tribute to them. You have beautifully penned. Let us have prayers for who ever died.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2015 2:41:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/16/2015 4:23:00 PM

Beautiful pen Anne-Lise! Excellent Haiku! Very heartfelt tribute, you've beautifully written here my dear friend, Anne.Yes, its so very tragic and sad all that took place in Paris.It's so hard for me very personally to even think about it right now, or any day.Thank you so much from my heart for writing this one.Sending you love and prayers!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:35:00 AM

- No God allows killing, human evil - Dorian, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/16/2015 3:42:00 PM

my prayers are with innocent victims and families not monsters who kill excellent piece pal wishing you a blessed evening

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:33:00 AM

- Heartless evil : "Killed, in cold blood", yes they are monsters Liam - Thanks for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anita Sharma

Date: 11/16/2015 2:03:00 PM

yes tragic thing happened,you have described it well

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:29:00 AM

- Thanks, Anita for the nice visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/16/2015 1:55:00 PM

Just tragic my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:28:00 AM

- Tim, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/16/2015 12:11:00 PM

Sad Anne,may the Lord grant all the fortutide to bear the loss, so uncivil; thanks for your tribute...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 12:22:00 PM

- A mourning day for really many people across the world, Kayod5 - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/15/2015 8:34:00 PM

Such a terrible senseless tragedy....your write is heartrending. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:24:00 AM

- A planned action against innocent people, who have the right to kill ? - Thanks for comments and visits, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2015 5:38:00 PM

You combine the salient points of this sad event in just 3 haiku, Anne Lise. A sequence from joy to death. What a waste of innocent lives! You do well to raise more awareness through your pen, sweet poetess! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:21:00 AM

- In a few seconds a pleasant evening has been an unreal nightmare, terrible Paul - Thanks for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/15/2015 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine, for thinking and writing about the tragic loss of life in Paris. SO sad. So so sad. May God comfort all who mourn. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:15:00 AM

- I know your heart, your family and friends in Beirut suffering and have it awful - Where innocent people who die every day, my heart and thoughts are with all those who suffer from evils of the world, dear Eileen - Thanks for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/15/2015 3:25:00 PM

Such a sad event, too. Your well chosen words capture the madness of it all. Will keep Paris AND Beirut in my thoughts and prayers. Really, all those that are affected by terrorism, without regard to where they live!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:18:00 AM

- Heartless evil "Killed, done in cold blood" - Thanks for comments and visits, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming

Date: 11/15/2015 1:56:00 PM

Men will always fight...It is in their nature. Every civilization that ever existed, be it great or small, was built out of sacrifice and someones spilled blood. To deny this immutable fact would be to deny the very essence of the "Natural Order" of all things. The world, indeed the very universe, is not a "Nice" place. It is, by its very nature, a violent one...And that will remain eternally so. Beautifully expressed, Anne Lise. My very best regards! :) john

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 2:09:00 PM

- Human have to fight as much as they want ..... but fair ! - Nuclear weapons and bombs are for people with "weak muscles" - I know that life is not a bed of roses - Thanks for comments and visits, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/15/2015 10:02:00 AM

As always your sensitive heart and spirit shows in your writes, Anne. Wishing all these atrocities would stop, but we can only pray, and yes, write as you, Arthur and many others did. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 11:19:00 AM

- Unfortunately, I think that it needs be done more than prayers - God has not created evil .... people on earth are to blame - Arthur has a fantastic poem on the same subject - Thanks for comments and visits, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Julia Ward

Date: 11/15/2015 7:29:00 AM

A dramatic first haiku at the last line.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 8:46:00 AM

- I get really scared when I see such a strong hatred among people, Julia - Where is the heart and love ? - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/15/2015 5:24:00 AM

Anne Lise, this is timely... sad that such is happening!! I pray for the world and the families of the victims.. And to those who did such crimes, may God have mercy on them.. and to those who are planning to disturb world's peace may they be convicted by their conscience and remember the importance of life... hugsxx~Olive Eloisa =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 8:48:00 AM

- A mourning day for really many people across the world, dear Olive - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/15/2015 4:40:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise! Beautiful tribute to a horrifying tragedy... The tittle is fine (i.e. correct French)!! Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 5:54:00 AM

- A Norwegian word :))): "tittle"

Terry O'Leary
Date: 11/15/2015 4:55:00 AM

Of course, I didn't mean "tiTTle"... I meant "tiTle"... :-) ---- And "la Vie Parisienne" might also be a suitable title... (not tittle). Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 4:44:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Terry - Thanks for comments and visits ..... my heart is with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 11/15/2015 12:13:00 AM

Your haiku is such a great tribute to this very beautiful city my dearest friend, Anne. It's really so sad and my heart is bleeding right now. But Prayer is all we need in this world at the moment. I'm hugging your lovely write my dear friend. The title is fine, I think; 'though I don't know French lang. I'm just reminded by my most faved piano piece, a very romantic one: La Vie En Rose. Thanks a lot for sharing and for the lovely visit! A blessed wkend dear friend. <3 lots/many hugs Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2015 3:00:00 AM

- Dear Leonora, thank you for your beautiful words - Always a pleasure to see you - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/14/2015 11:23:00 PM

Your title translates to "The Life Of Paris". It is so sad what is transpiring in Paris and in the country. I love that beautiful city and all its art. I pray for the people in their sorrow. A lovely tribute Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 8:49:00 AM

- A mourning day for really many people across the world, dear Connie - Thanks for comments and visits - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2015 8:09:00 PM

You chose a fitting topic to write about for today , dearie. Such a sad thing it was!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 4:14:00 AM

- Something which occupies all our thoughts - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/14/2015 2:56:00 PM

the Life of Paris....somehow it varies....from romance, cuisine and flowers....to being the target of foolish cowards....God Teaches us to Love....and Vengence Belongs To Him Up Above....so what gives any man the nerve....to brainwash the weak minded, on Judgment Day, they will get exactly what they deserve....inspiring anne and my first words are the translation....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 3:08:00 PM

- In a few seconds, everything changed ..... into a living hell ....... terrible !!!!! - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comment, Eric - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha

Date: 11/14/2015 12:14:00 PM

very timely piece Anne!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 2:11:00 PM

- Today my poem are written in sorrow, Miraj .... not with ink, but with blood and tears - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)