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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2016 8:33:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..We are sometimes betwix and between but thank God there is light at the end of the tunnel..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2016 10:55:00 AM

- Thank you, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/7/2015 12:10:00 PM

Sad times and joyful times all apart of life my friend. Lovely haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2015 2:40:00 PM

- Phyllis, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/5/2015 9:01:00 AM

Yes-life has its happy and sad moments, and they usually seem to accompany one another. Almost, but not always.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/5/2015 11:36:00 AM

- Yeah, that's probably what is 'normal' in the life, Duke :) - Thank you for nice visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/2/2015 4:41:00 PM

Dear Anne Lise What a sad poem of loneliness, it makes the reader want to step back and reflect on ones life and troubled moments, to find the inner self and let go to enjoy the worthness of exsistence, thought provoking and inspirational, loved it Anne Lise great job, and also glad you enjoyed my Bloody Mary, Linda is the one whom asked for it, I never heard of it except in passing, so did I nail the old gal or what, lol cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/3/2015 5:50:00 AM

- Yes, you did! :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments on my poem, Cherl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/1/2015 5:31:00 PM

beautifully painted haikus anne lise wishing you a blessed weekend pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/3/2015 5:51:00 AM

- Dear Liam, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Almonte

Date: 9/27/2015 3:48:00 PM

I love haikus! "explore your shadows" umm hmm!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2015 4:14:00 AM

- Eve, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Norma Arana

Date: 9/27/2015 3:06:00 PM

Dance in the joy of life's pleasure. Fabulous haiku, Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2015 4:14:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Norma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2015 11:31:00 AM

Gray skies and loneliness are balanced by lovely accomplishments and a joy of life. Life offers both options and we gradually learn to deal with them as we grow older and wiser. ~ Hope you're having a lovely weekend, Anne Lise:) hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2015 2:39:00 PM

- Yes that's true, Paul - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2015 6:27:00 PM

Joy brings forth light taking away the gloomy gray sky and the loneliness. Nice write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2015 7:18:00 AM

- Yes that's true, Michael - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2015 2:21:00 PM

Anne-Lise, they are both wonderful but the second one truly speaks to my soul, "7" and thanks for visiting my poem, it was me, mother . . .and for the nice comment

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2015 2:59:00 PM

- B.W., thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyva Marty

Date: 9/26/2015 11:05:00 AM

Happiness erases any sign of gloom. A good way to look at life. This is wonder-filled!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2015 1:49:00 PM

- Lyva, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 9/24/2015 9:12:00 AM

I love this awesome haiku of yours my dear friend, Anne Lise! In gloomy hours of our life,we can still find joy with determination. Very beautiful and uplifting. Hugging it and you. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hug, leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:23:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, dear friend Leonora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/24/2015 1:14:00 AM

A very love piece.......A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:21:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/23/2015 8:05:00 AM

Anne Lise, lovely is the first line and first set... beautiful then the second wow that's full of strength and determination~~Olive ELoisa =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:23:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/22/2015 3:08:00 PM

Your 'ku epitome your perspective on life, Anne. Such optimism and joy despite the gray skies. Thank you for the poet that your are. hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:23:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/22/2015 7:10:00 AM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! A beautiful, yet sad metaphor here. But the poignancy of its message makes it all the more compelling and powerful. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:22:00 PM

- Dear Gary, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/21/2015 7:17:00 PM

I love the beautiful flow of this write dear poet.....an encouraging piece.......A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:21:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/21/2015 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful but sadness is hidden in your poem but inspires to feel joy even in loneliness. At the end, a final truth for all. Excellent gem. 7 sure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:21:00 PM

- Dear Bl, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2015 12:18:00 PM

let the joy sway and discard the tremble of fear... you inspire with this superb 'ku, anne... made my day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/25/2015 1:20:00 PM

- Nette, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/21/2015 2:55:00 AM

Light and darkness, hope and fear dance with beauty, dear Anne Lise. What a dance!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2015 8:52:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, dear friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/20/2015 11:34:00 PM

Even in the darkest shadows we can find beauty and joy... A wonderful message you send in these lines. Nicely written, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2015 8:52:00 AM

- Kelly, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/20/2015 3:39:00 PM

"Allow yourself to feel joy" is my favorite line, Sunshine. :) Sending you hugs...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2015 8:52:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments,Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2015 2:53:00 PM

I liked that contrast of ballet and grey sky. Nicely done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2015 8:53:00 AM

- Andrea, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2015 2:30:00 PM

beautiful imagery Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2015 8:51:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)