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Elemental in water form, taking on a human shape.

Small drops ... mouth running molecules in the bottle Moan of blood and sweat 07.03.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) howmanysyllables.com 5-7-5

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Silent One

Date: 3/8/2018 8:02:00 AM

Oooh this is a deeeeep haiku...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 8:15:00 AM

- Deep like the ocean, S.O. - Many thanks for comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 3/7/2018 11:21:00 PM

What a wonderful wet Haiku Anne-Lise, water is something we yearn for, well written my friend, take care........Vera

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 3:12:00 AM

- We can not survive without water :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2018 9:26:00 PM

An emotive haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 3:10:00 AM

- Many thanks, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 3/7/2018 8:54:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku Anne-Lise, and the image enhances, without taking away anything the words portray. Good luck in the contest....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 3:13:00 AM

- Maria, many thanks for lovely comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/7/2018 6:03:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise, This is a brilliantly-done Haiku!! Each word in each verse has its place, and forms a perfect word picture which is further enhanced by the photo image (above) of rising hand of water. A superb setting for sure!! A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 3:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for a great and meaningful comment, Gary - And special thanks for your "fav" - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2018 3:21:00 PM

ahhh, great depiction of a great thirst!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 3:10:00 AM

- Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/7/2018 2:32:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, what a great Haiku you have penned, my very talented friend! This is a winner for sure! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2018 3:09:00 AM

- Appreciate your lovely comment :) - Many thanks, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/7/2018 12:27:00 PM

Superb beauty and truth in your Haiku dearest Anne-Lise! Love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2018 12:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/7/2018 12:11:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , powerful Haiku , amazing fer words , good luck in contest my friend ::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2018 12:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for lovely comment, Niall :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/7/2018 8:08:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, another golden gem from your pen. Wishing you well in the contest. Your Haiku always sing. Every Haiku you write is truly special. This one joins the rest of my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2018 11:34:00 AM

- I usually have no luck in contest Mike, but your "fav" means more to me :) - Many thanks for lovely comment - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)