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- Haiku X 123 - Water -

Small drops ... mouth running
                            molecules in the bottle
                          Moan of blood and sweat










07.03.2018
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Silent One Date: 3/8/2018 8:02:00 AM Oooh this is a deeeeep haiku... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 8:15:00 AM - Deep like the ocean, S.O. - Many thanks for comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan Date: 3/7/2018 11:21:00 PM What a wonderful wet Haiku Anne-Lise, water is something we yearn for, well written my friend, take care........Vera Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 3:12:00 AM - We can not survive without water :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2018 9:26:00 PM An emotive haiku! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 3:10:00 AM - Many thanks, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 3/7/2018 8:54:00 PM A wonderful Haiku Anne-Lise, and the image enhances, without taking away anything the words portray. Good luck in the contest....Maria xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 3:13:00 AM - Maria, many thanks for lovely comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 3/7/2018 6:03:00 PM Hello Anne-Lise, This is a brilliantly-done Haiku!! Each word in each verse has its place, and forms a perfect word picture which is further enhanced by the photo image (above) of rising hand of water. A superb setting for sure!! A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 3:28:00 AM - Many thanks for a great and meaningful comment, Gary - And special thanks for your "fav" - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2018 3:21:00 PM ahhh, great depiction of a great thirst! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 3:10:00 AM - Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/7/2018 2:32:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise, what a great Haiku you have penned, my very talented friend! This is a winner for sure! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2018 3:09:00 AM - Appreciate your lovely comment :) - Many thanks, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/7/2018 12:27:00 PM Superb beauty and truth in your Haiku dearest Anne-Lise! Love it! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 12:31:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/7/2018 8:08:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, another golden gem from your pen. Wishing you well in the contest. Your Haiku always sing. Every Haiku you write is truly special. This one joins the rest of my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 11:34:00 AM - I usually have no luck in contest Mike, but your "fav" means more to me :) - Many thanks for lovely comment - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie Date: 3/7/2018 7:42:00 AM Life needs to flow through it....because only Baptism Can Renew it....water is the Greatest Conduit....very nice my dear friend anne....;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 11:29:00 AM - Appreciate your lovely comment, Eric :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 3/7/2018 7:37:00 AM Wonderful haiku Anne... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 11:29:00 AM - Many thanks for your great comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2018 7:25:00 AM A deep haiku Anne lise that Final line had my mind whirling:-) :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 11:31:00 AM - Thank you Jan, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/7/2018 6:23:00 AM This has a story behind your words..deep poetry..good luck for the contest, Anne-Lise. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 7:01:00 AM - Yes, it has ... glad you felt it, many thanks Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/7/2018 4:57:00 AM Another hakiu gem for the contest. Good luck Sunshine. Tom. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2018 7:00:00 AM - Many thanks for your great comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)