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Elemental in water form, taking on a human shape.


                        Small drops ... mouth running
                            molecules in the bottle
                          Moan of blood and sweat










07.03.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 4/4/2018 4:19:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. A wonderful Haiku. Enjoyed reading. Hugs. T.J
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Date: 4/4/2018 4:21:00 AM
- Nice to see you, Teppo :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/8/2018 8:02:00 AM
Oooh this is a deeeeep haiku...
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Date: 3/8/2018 8:15:00 AM
- Deep like the ocean, S.O. - Many thanks for comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 11:21:00 PM
What a wonderful wet Haiku Anne-Lise, water is something we yearn for, well written my friend, take care........Vera
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:12:00 AM
- We can not survive without water :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 9:26:00 PM
An emotive haiku!
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:10:00 AM
- Many thanks, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 8:54:00 PM
A wonderful Haiku Anne-Lise, and the image enhances, without taking away anything the words portray. Good luck in the contest....Maria xxx
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:13:00 AM
- Maria, many thanks for lovely comment :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 6:03:00 PM
Hello Anne-Lise, This is a brilliantly-done Haiku!! Each word in each verse has its place, and forms a perfect word picture which is further enhanced by the photo image (above) of rising hand of water. A superb setting for sure!! A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:28:00 AM
- Many thanks for a great and meaningful comment, Gary - And special thanks for your "fav" - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 3:21:00 PM
ahhh, great depiction of a great thirst!
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:10:00 AM
- Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 2:32:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, what a great Haiku you have penned, my very talented friend! This is a winner for sure! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:09:00 AM
- Appreciate your lovely comment :) - Many thanks, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 12:27:00 PM
Superb beauty and truth in your Haiku dearest Anne-Lise! Love it!
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Date: 3/7/2018 12:31:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 12:11:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , powerful Haiku , amazing fer words , good luck in contest my friend ::))) hugs
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Date: 3/7/2018 12:19:00 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comment, Niall :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 8:08:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, another golden gem from your pen. Wishing you well in the contest. Your Haiku always sing. Every Haiku you write is truly special. This one joins the rest of my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/7/2018 11:34:00 AM
- I usually have no luck in contest Mike, but your "fav" means more to me :) - Many thanks for lovely comment - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 7:42:00 AM
Life needs to flow through it....because only Baptism Can Renew it....water is the Greatest Conduit....very nice my dear friend anne....;)
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Date: 3/7/2018 11:29:00 AM
- Appreciate your lovely comment, Eric :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 7:37:00 AM
Wonderful haiku Anne...
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Date: 3/7/2018 11:29:00 AM
- Many thanks for your great comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 7:25:00 AM
A deep haiku Anne lise that Final line had my mind whirling:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2018 11:31:00 AM
- Thank you Jan, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 6:23:00 AM
This has a story behind your words..deep poetry..good luck for the contest, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/7/2018 7:01:00 AM
- Yes, it has ... glad you felt it, many thanks Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2018 4:57:00 AM
Another hakiu gem for the contest. Good luck Sunshine. Tom.
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Date: 3/7/2018 7:00:00 AM
- Many thanks for your great comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)