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Charmed by its beauty Hear a sweet whisper of love Shiny fake diamonds ~ Pink lips temptations All these broken promises Perpetual lie ~ Truth like grains of sand Beyond golden cornfields Something very pure 13.07.2017 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - www.howmanysyllables.com - Haiku 5-7-5

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Akkina Downing

Date: 11/25/2020 9:17:00 AM

This is still my fave :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2020 11:43:00 AM

:) ... hugs

Indiana Shaw

Date: 7/28/2017 12:04:00 PM

Awww I've been done in by a tart of frog - ha ha ha - I have lots to learn of poems of other forms - enjoying the understanding of it all via yourself - lovely frog "eh poem - Indiana x x x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 12:23:00 PM

- Glad you liked the frog :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/19/2017 6:34:00 PM

j have enjoyed your Haiku X 118 I hope you have a nice day. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2017 3:03:00 PM

- Thank you very much for visit and comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/17/2017 8:13:00 AM

I love this, I'm going to fave it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/18/2017 1:42:00 PM

- Many thanks for visits and comments, Akkina ... special thanks for a "fav." - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/15/2017 3:03:00 PM

Sometimes people see what they want based on their need, illusion can be a drunken deception

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2017 2:52:00 PM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/15/2017 1:21:00 PM

Wonderful imagery; a great read.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2017 3:21:00 PM

- Thank you for your great comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/15/2017 6:24:00 AM

Amazing and true string of haikus, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2017 2:52:00 PM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/14/2017 2:56:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , great write , if you can count your friends on one hand you are lucky , really enjoyed this one :)))hugs and have a great beautiful weekend :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2017 3:07:00 PM

- So true, Niall - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/14/2017 7:24:00 AM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, I really liked your three-linked Haikus here!! And the attached picture of the winking, pink-lipped frog is absolutely perfect. Your contrasting of fakery and the truth is perfect. A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Cheers and Best from Ingrid and me!! Have a great weekend too!! Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for your beautiful words, a fav. and pleasant visit on my poem, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane

Date: 7/13/2017 5:29:00 PM

Phonies are always revealed. Those pink froggie lips are not appealing to me but that's one of the cutest gifs I've ever seen. My fave was the third Haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2017 2:52:00 PM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2017 4:36:00 PM

I hate being deceived Anne lise and have been told some whoppers both in my personal life and in soup land and I don't want fakes in my life:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2017 2:51:00 PM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2017 2:43:00 PM

Oh nice, fakes so many out there. I want to meet honesty

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 3:31:00 PM

- Always nice to see you on my poems, Eve :) - Thank you for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/13/2017 12:00:00 PM

These are lovely Anne-Lise! There is a lot of counterfeit in the world today isn't there. It makes the genuine that much more valuable. - Dean

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 12:05:00 PM

- The real is very rare today ... but we can still find "real diamonds" - They are very valuable, Dean :) - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/13/2017 11:52:00 AM

Some evocative writes A-L...happy weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:58:00 AM

- Hi Tim, made me wonder ... is it Friday already :) - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/13/2017 8:29:00 AM

Good Morning Anne. I hope this day finds you well. Take a bow with your execution on the Haiku Suite. It flowed and read as one. The theme is timeless. May I say you also brought some fun besides beauty with your attached image. All is well within your entry in composition and construction. Have a wonderful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:55:00 AM

- Always nice to see you on my poems - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Lisa :) - Have a wonderful evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/13/2017 8:13:00 AM

I like these very much. Your third one is simply beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:52:00 AM

- A pleasure that you enjoyed my haiku, Dale - Thank you for your great comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/13/2017 8:06:00 AM

I've certainly had my fair share of fake friends. great haiku AL:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:50:00 AM

- Better with a few real friends than 100 fake :) - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/13/2017 6:48:00 AM

Some people like living in a fake sense of reality sadly enough. They really dont want to open their eyes. The Haiku is genuine and real, and its really great....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:46:00 AM

- I prefer my own "company" than fake "friends" ... even if it's shining ... it's not real - Thank you for your great comments and visits, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 7/13/2017 6:37:00 AM

This was cute Anne-Lise. Though a little scary when I really think about it. But wonderfully written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:43:00 AM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Chris :) - There are many "fake diamonds" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/13/2017 5:48:00 AM

This is adorable! What a great Haiku :) Have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:41:00 AM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2017 5:46:00 AM

Marvelous! Nothing fake with the Haiku though my friend, Anne-Lise! All are real diamonds! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2017 11:41:00 AM

- Thank you for your great comments and visits, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)