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Busy bees, honey please, fuzzy golden brown seas, displeased feverish breeze. I've tried so hard to keep the bees off the three sheep, but these bees seem to wheeze on by the trees and tease. Gee whiz! Don't they know where there hive is where they share? Don't they care birds in air? Bees full of nectars joy chasing past a young boy not the slightest bit coy. Around the sweet fillies a garland of lilies; Millie, Billie, Gillies, and Willies all whinnies. Indeed, offspring hinnies; took heed of the queen bee's swarm stings, fast run to flee. I'm runnin , pumpin free on the edge of the quay. 2-9-2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 9:37:00 AM
Competition, I see you ;)
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Date: 2/10/2018 6:41:00 PM
Very creative thinking,Eve. And cute illustration with your rhymed poem.
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:07:00 PM
the bee flies....stings you then dies....the skin swells, some hear cries....painful tears running down the eyes....so take this advice, it is wise....just stay away from bee hives....very cute and funny mrs roper....;)
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Date: 2/10/2018 5:06:00 AM
Great take on the contest Eve...
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