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Feverish Bees

Busy bees, honey please, 
fuzzy golden brown seas,  
displeased feverish breeze.

I've tried so hard to keep
the bees off the three sheep,
but these bees seem to wheeze
on by the trees and tease.

Gee whiz! Don't they know where
there hive is where they share?
Don't they care birds in air?
 

Bees full of nectars joy
chasing past a young boy
not the slightest bit coy.

Around the sweet fillies
a garland of lilies;
Millie, Billie, Gillies,
and Willies all whinnies.
Indeed, offspring hinnies; 
took heed of the queen bee's
swarm stings, fast run to flee.


I'm runnin , pumpin free
on the edge of the quay. 

2-9-2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Payton Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Competition, I see you ;)
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Very creative thinking,Eve. And cute illustration with your rhymed poem.
Boddie Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 3:07 PM
the bee flies....stings you then dies....the skin swells, some hear cries....painful tears running down the eyes....so take this advice, it is wise....just stay away from bee hives....very cute and funny mrs roper....;)
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February 10, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Great take on the contest Eve...
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