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- Deep Ocean Tune -

Water droplets become liquid pearls, delicately balanced on milky white petals Crowning gems sparkling jewels mist under lashes gleam The beautiful white yellow sunlight all visible wavelengths of light refraction Fluttering a rainbow promise under the bridge colors bright The goddess of fertility, wealth and comfort her name Dana-Ana A crowning beauty sings whom stands in every dream Sitting on deep rocks a treasure who combs every feeling Sea cradled her and she heard Neptune whisper .... so beautiful you are With golden glowing fingers of emotions held captivated in her rays Filled with warm love when evening shadows and stars turns out in the sky Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Diane Christian

Date: 6/9/2015 8:04:00 AM

beautiful written thank you for your kind feed back on my poem provision. God has really been providing so much lately, he always does but even more so recently, after repenting against spirit of fear, and breaking agreements of words people have said about me/over me that i become to think its true and I have even put my self down, thinking I was never good enough, but things are very different now, for I only need to focus on what God thinks about me im valuable to him that's what counts

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2015 1:40:00 PM

- Nice that you enjoy Liams and my poem, Diane - thanks for the visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/1/2015 3:15:00 PM

A wonderful couplet Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2015 4:17:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy Liams and mine co-write, thank you dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2015 12:28:00 PM

incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2015 12:38:00 PM

- Funom, thank you for an enjoyable visit and a 7 at Liams and my poem: - Deep Ocean Tune - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2015 11:39:00 AM

Wonderful write from both of you, love all the beautiful colorful words as a paint brush flows smooth with liquin and oils on a canvas :~) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2015 12:03:00 PM

- Nice that you enjoy Liams and my poem today, Eve - thanks for the visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2015 3:48:00 PM

A wonderful collaboration..Way to go you two..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2015 5:49:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy our latest co-write, thank you Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2015 4:59:00 AM

A delightful collaboration Anne Lise & Liam; charmed by the deep ocean tune and the imagery. All the best. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2015 6:14:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy Liams and my latest co-write, thank you Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/7/2015 3:35:00 PM

your pen anne lise shone golden in this always a great pleasure writing with you dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2015 1:26:00 AM

- U 2, Liam :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 5/7/2015 10:50:00 AM

Was mesmerized by this lovely writing....wonderful job of combined work...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2015 12:18:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and comments Donna - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/7/2015 8:18:00 AM

Stunning! When you and Liam collaborate, magic arises.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2015 8:30:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy our latest co-write, thank you Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2015 12:55:00 PM

dazzling beauty of a work laden with a sea of wonderment.. another worthy collab, anne.. how are you.. happy day with huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2015 8:32:00 AM

- I'm well, thank you for asking ..... and thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/6/2015 5:23:00 AM

I love the ocean and this poem transported me there; it's quite a tranquil write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/6/2015 6:02:00 AM

- I love to sit on the land to see the ocean, but I am being terrible seasick on boat - Do not think I could have been a "mermaid" :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/5/2015 2:22:00 PM

My mind was flooded with images of wonder as I read these captivating lines... Another lovely write from you & Liam!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2015 2:40:00 PM

- Thanks Kelly, a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/5/2015 10:49:00 AM

An excellent beauty scene is adorned with soft aluminating colors shimering in the waving droplets of imaginary ocean's depth. So incredible piece. 7+ sure. Bye... Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2015 12:13:00 PM

- Bl, thank you for an enjoyable visit and a 7 at Liams and my poem: - Deep Ocean Tune - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/5/2015 7:39:00 AM

It is well written with cleaver imagery and powerful emotions that whisper their presents from the page. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2015 12:14:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy Liams and my latest co-write, thank you Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/5/2015 7:37:00 AM

Anne-Lise, beautifully pen, soothing and magical, you both did a great job writing this, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, I have things...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2015 12:11:00 PM

- B.W. thank you for an enjoyable visit, a 7 at Liams and my poem: - Deep Ocean Tune - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/4/2015 5:28:00 PM

great imagery A-L and Liam...lovely Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2015 2:54:00 AM

- Thank you, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/4/2015 6:50:00 AM

Stunning imagery here, dear friends. Is Dana-Ana what you call the goddess of fertility in your country, Anne? A sweet name. I see a lovely tale unfolding with Neptune. I loved it! Hugs! Kim PS. Congratulations for week 2 in the POW Chart! Wooohoooo!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2015 6:58:00 AM

- No, I've never heard the name Dana-Ana before .... but I have read it somewhere .... not in Norwegian, I do not know what she is called in Norwegian - Thanks for congratulations on POW ! - Glad you enjoy our latest co-write, thank you my friend Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2015 6:15:00 AM

captivating write my friends a 7 as ever hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2015 6:27:00 AM

- Neptune whisper : .... thank you for visiting a 7 and comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nandita Das

Date: 5/4/2015 6:01:00 AM

Beautiful. Captivating imagery. #7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2015 6:25:00 AM

- Dear Nandita, thank you for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Williams

Date: 5/4/2015 4:21:00 AM

A lovely piece, ..... Beautiful Anne Lise, The emotions you evoke,.....Can only increase............John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2015 6:20:00 AM

- Nice that you enjoy Liams and my poem today - thanks for the visit and comments, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)