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- Dancing Shoes, No Thanks - For me to make a choice is easy Freedom for my little toes Not shiny or high heels No catwalks or dance floor I seek Sore toes and heels create nightmares I choose the color red, just because it is cool You can borrow my shoes for a day and two So give them your time and give them your heart No problem to walk mil after mil It is the easiest thing I doubted if you ever would come back 28.08.2016 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/12/2016 3:42:00 PM

Cool poem, Anne-Lise. I can go w/the freedom for the toes all day long. I walk around in sandals all day everyday. Gotta give them toes and feet comfort, right. Love the poem though. Love and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2016 2:03:00 PM

- Freedom for the toes is important, Freddie :) - Thanks for the nice visit and smile comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/22/2016 11:36:00 AM

Matter of loving, choice rest in heart. Beautifully done. Again, it's wonderful gem. Loved much. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2016 1:18:00 PM

- Thank you my friend Bl, glad you came to visit:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/31/2016 11:43:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Ann. Freedom is the greatest treasure we can have and share. Have a beautiful day!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2016 11:54:00 AM

- I agree with that, Joe :) - Thank you for your words and lovely visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nilima Deb

Date: 8/30/2016 1:58:00 PM

Shoes can be color the thought of pen in this way never thought..you are brilliant Sunshine.enjoyed the write !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 2:10:00 PM

- Always nice to see you, Nilima :) - Thank you for your words and lovely visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/29/2016 3:42:00 PM

You have got so attached to them I wouldn't want to take them off you x they feel so loved x good poem x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 3:44:00 AM

- Wendy, thank you for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2016 6:14:00 PM

Very creative write on the topic! Good luck in contest!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2016 3:23:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2016 2:39:00 PM

Made me smile Anne Lise good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 2:51:00 PM

- Thanks, Jan :) - it is you who are experts on "SMILE POETRY" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2016 2:34:00 PM

yes, walk on lightly, anne...charmed by your lines.. happy day and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 2:41:00 PM

- But not charmed by my shoes? :))) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 8/28/2016 2:21:00 PM

Made me smile :0)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 2:43:00 PM

- A pleasure, Mike :) - Thanks, glad you came to visit:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/28/2016 12:19:00 PM

Is that a baby buzzard standing close to your shoe? Not sure if I'll need to borrow those. But I loved the poem...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 12:30:00 PM

- Sorry Charlie, I can not answer you on what the bird is called - Really .... you will not lend my shoes ? - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/28/2016 9:52:00 AM

Lovely...I prefer barefoot and fancy free : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 12:22:00 PM

- I prefer barefoot me too, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/28/2016 9:43:00 AM

A sweet poem with a delightful innocent feel..your last two lines are superb...I really enjoyed reading this one..a happy way to begin the day...thank you :-) My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 11:56:00 AM

- I do not write so often to contest ....... (and rarely win, but it means nothing) - The most important thing is to have fun, and hope someone like what I post :)) - Thank you for your joyful visits and comments, Lynn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/28/2016 9:39:00 AM

I appreciate the offer, Anne-Lise, But I think I'll keep these. They're already broken in. This is another witty and clever write from you. The last couplet is pure gold!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 11:51:00 AM

- I'm afraid that my shoes are too small for your feet, Daniel - But it was nice of you that you read my poem, thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kiana Venter

Date: 8/28/2016 9:21:00 AM

Well this is such a great write

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 11:48:00 AM

- Nice you liked my poem, thank you for the lovely visit Kiana - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/28/2016 9:00:00 AM

The last couplet has hidden meanings, I like this one:) All the best:) The contest is filling fast and I've not even started mine..boo hoo:(

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 11:45:00 AM

- Thanks for the best wishes and visit Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)