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I borrowed the picture from Andrea Dietrich

The horizon split its emotions in ember fire, cobalt skies an opening for the sun to pierce its heaven. To drink its opulence of the cerulean sea ebbing to the shores. Where humans walk the pallid sand, green algae coastal rocks, through fields of flaming wild orange and red poppies. It fills its thoughts to gently thread upon the swells of the shore. To breathe its scents and walk together. The urge to kiss the world morphing into the flourished field with its being, allowing it to yield. 1/4/2019

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Date: 2/3/2019 8:27:00 PM
Hello Eve, a beautiful poem created by you . With a beautiful picture to go with it. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:48:00 PM
Nicely written. Love the imagery.
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Date: 1/30/2019 11:09:00 AM
This is so beautiful! The imagery of vivid colors is so evident. A lovely verse. Congrats!
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:43:00 PM
Oh Eve, I did not even know those were poppies when I wrote on this picture. I think you captured the colorful part of the field so much better than I did. I LOVE what you did with the picture. Isn't it just wonderful? Congrats with your win with Brian. My poem on this picture won in another of his contests!!
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:10:00 PM
So vibrant, such vivid imagery. An artist's palette in every line! This is an instant FAVE for me. Outstanding poetry, Eve! Awesome in the real sense of that word! ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/5/2019 12:38:00 PM
Eve, oh what an enchanting poem and I love that image too ~
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Date: 1/5/2019 9:55:00 AM
I am in mental heaven right now... My mind is so full of colours from this piece. Lovely, so lovely! Happy 2019
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Date: 1/5/2019 6:14:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Eve... a wonderful poem..
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:04:00 AM
Such beauty, the line "The horizon split its emotions in" simply draws the reader into the whole poem!!!
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Date: 1/4/2019 3:40:00 PM
Hi Eve, this is such a beautiful write. It truly comes from a pen dipped in Gold. I was entranced by start to finish with the wonderful images your words did paint. What a joy to read this evening. A definite fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/4/2019 4:04:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you for dropping by and favoring my poem wonderful and a great inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/4/2019 2:55:00 PM
what a vibrant work...you fill me up, eve...huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/4/2019 3:59:00 PM
thank you , Nette, for your inspiring complimenton my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/4/2019 2:30:00 PM
So lovely, Eve! Janice
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/4/2019 4:04:00 PM
thank you, Janice . Hugs Eve ~`*

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