Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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I borrowed the picture from Andrea Dietrich

Breathe Life

The horizon split its emotions in
ember fire, cobalt skies an opening
for the sun to pierce its heaven. To drink
its opulence of the cerulean 
sea ebbing to the shores. Where humans walk
the pallid sand, green algae coastal rocks,
through fields of flaming wild orange and red
poppies. It fills its thoughts to gently thread
upon the swells of the shore. To breathe its
scents and walk together. The urge to kiss
the world morphing into the flourished field
with its being, allowing it to yield.

1/4/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2019 at 8:27 PM Hello Eve, a beautiful poem created by you . With a beautiful picture to go with it. have a nice evening my friend.

Valerie Staton February 3, 2019 at 4:48 PM Nicely written. Love the imagery.

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2019 at 4:43 PM Oh Eve, I did not even know those were poppies when I wrote on this picture. I think you captured the colorful part of the field so much better than I did. I LOVE what you did with the picture. Isn't it just wonderful? Congrats with your win with Brian. My poem on this picture won in another of his contests!!

Gershon Wolf January 6, 2019 at 4:10 PM So vibrant, such vivid imagery. An artist's palette in every line! This is an instant FAVE for me. Outstanding poetry, Eve! Awesome in the real sense of that word! ~ Gershon

Constance La France January 5, 2019 at 12:38 PM Eve, oh what an enchanting poem and I love that image too ~

Funom Makama January 5, 2019 at 9:55 AM I am in mental heaven right now... My mind is so full of colours from this piece. Lovely, so lovely! Happy 2019

Silent One January 5, 2019 at 6:14 AM Beautiful imagery Eve... a wonderful poem..

Arthur Vaso January 5, 2019 at 1:04 AM Such beauty, the line "The horizon split its emotions in" simply draws the reader into the whole poem!!!

Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 3:40 PM Hi Eve, this is such a beautiful write. It truly comes from a pen dipped in Gold. I was entranced by start to finish with the wonderful images your words did paint. What a joy to read this evening. A definite fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX Eve Roper January 4, 2019 at 4:04 PM Dear friend, thank you for dropping by and favoring my poem wonderful and a great inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*

Nette Onclaud January 4, 2019 at 2:55 PM what a vibrant work...you fill me up, eve...huggs Eve Roper January 4, 2019 at 3:59 PM thank you , Nette, for your inspiring complimenton my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*

Janice Canerdy January 4, 2019 at 2:30 PM So lovely, Eve! Janice Eve Roper January 4, 2019 at 4:04 PM thank you, Janice . Hugs Eve ~`*