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- Between Two Heartbeat -

Comfort me with the beauty of flowers where the sunlight beams dance warmly supreme Devoid of any tears, cruelty or violence a veil falls away opening petals kiss deeply surrendering Seasoned between the vertical light and darker clouds it becomes hard to breathe in your shade breathless sighs Love does not change even if the earth is frozen over but as you melt into the mind sweet honey dew springs This night is all souls night, you can not fail to feel it residing inside the eyes fountain of forever youth For the glance of one gentle heart, she will be your bride radiating warm flames glow anointing preciously the union To share along the way, feathers from Heaven every day touching gently the softest satin holds you an angel always divine A Collaborated Poem 05.12.2015 Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :) (Unrymed Couplet )

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James Inman

Date: 2/9/2016 7:50:00 AM

Lovely, lovely piece.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/9/2016 8:16:00 AM

- Thanks for your comments and your visit, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelli White

Date: 12/30/2015 10:38:00 AM

Beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2015 11:47:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kelli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 12/22/2015 8:00:00 AM

your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2015 11:12:00 AM

- Funom, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/19/2015 6:49:00 AM

When you talk of this kind of love and beauty, it is pleasing to see that it's a collaboration. Just a perfect match that reinforces the subject. It's something special. How does magic like that even happen? It just overwhelms me to think of the symmetry in something like this and how you do it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2015 7:22:00 AM

- It's true ..... there is something special ...... it's magic ...... could not write such poems unless we were in the same "planet" :)))) - Thank you for the beautiful words, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Renee Dawson

Date: 12/14/2015 11:42:00 PM

A smoothly written comforting piece.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2015 3:36:00 AM

- J.R, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/14/2015 11:09:00 AM

Congrats on ur wining my dear Anne lise u surly deserve it... I'm captured by this one truly a breath taking master piece... Always feeling pleasure reading 4 u 2... Hugs :D dalia

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2015 12:25:00 PM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 12/12/2015 9:28:00 AM

Lovely, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/13/2015 12:18:00 PM

- James, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/9/2015 5:03:00 PM

congratulations anne lise on poem of the day and for the pleasure of joining pens wishing you a blessed day pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2015 2:23:00 AM

- I share this honor with you, dear friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2015 9:04:00 AM

Beautiful! A seamless collaboration. Well done, Anne Lise & Liam! Congrats on POTD. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2015 11:50:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 6:09:00 AM

Anne Lise and Liam, just beautiful and endearing.. soothing and the imagery is lingering!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2015 11:50:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and comments, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Waweru Ngugi

Date: 12/7/2015 11:17:00 PM

wow! a very beautiful piece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2015 3:12:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and comments, Waweru :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/7/2015 8:39:00 PM

Way to go! Great choice for POTD. Congrats to you both.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2015 3:11:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/7/2015 7:16:00 PM

Beautiful , Anne-Lise & Liam, congratulations on poem of the day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2015 3:11:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/7/2015 6:23:00 PM

Beautiful...simply beautiful! Congrats to both of you! Hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2015 3:11:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos

Date: 12/7/2015 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations Anne Lise and Liam on your Poem of the Day.....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2015 3:10:00 AM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2015 2:48:00 PM

So lovely, Anne-Lise and Liam. A heartfelt congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor! Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 2:58:00 PM

- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/7/2015 12:03:00 PM

Congratulations on this awesome piece being picked as the poem of the day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:29:00 PM

- And .... thank you for congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/7/2015 12:02:00 PM

Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous! Straight to my faves.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:27:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words + FAV!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/7/2015 9:31:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!I' m so very happy for you both.Well done!Just awesome!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:26:00 PM

- I'm so very happy, me too ..... and I think Liam as well :))) - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/7/2015 8:08:00 AM

Another great collaboration! :) Grats on poem of the day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 8:46:00 AM

- Casarah glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane

Date: 12/7/2015 6:07:00 AM

This is lovely... congratulations to both of you. ~ Lin ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 6:13:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words and congrats Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 12/7/2015 12:00:00 AM

Anne-Lise and Liam a wonderful collaboration. Enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 6:04:00 AM

- Michael, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/6/2015 12:52:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise and Liam . . . A brilliant collaboration of efforts on this wonderfully rendered Unrhymed Couplet. Written with warm passion, deep feeling, and true radiance. Superb!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 6:12:00 AM

..... Yes, warm words from our hearts, Gary - Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words + TR/FAV!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/6/2015 12:35:00 PM

both of you can publish a collab book... i am amazed by the wonder of affection with heavenly touches, anne... a sunday's best!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 6:09:00 AM

- No good business making poetry book in Norway, Nette - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 11:58:00 AM

Anne Lise and Liam your pens flow golden words - absolutely delightful couplets:-) hugs Jan xx7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2015 6:06:00 AM

- Jan, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)