- Between Two Heartbeat -

Comfort me with the beauty of flowers
where the sunlight beams dance warmly supreme

Devoid of any tears, cruelty or violence
a veil falls away opening petals kiss deeply surrendering

Seasoned between the vertical light and darker clouds
it becomes hard to breathe in your shade breathless sighs 

Love does not change even if the earth is frozen over
but as you melt into the mind sweet honey dew springs 

This night is all souls night, you can not fail to feel it
residing inside the eyes fountain of forever youth 

For the glance of one gentle heart, she will be your bride
radiating warm flames glow anointing preciously the union

To share along the way, feathers from Heaven every day
touching gently the softest satin holds you an angel always divine 





A Collaborated Poem 05.12.2015
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :)
(Unrymed Couplet )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/9/2016 7:50:00 AM
Lovely, lovely piece.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/9/2016 8:16:00 AM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/30/2015 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 12/30/2015 11:47:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kelli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/22/2015 8:00:00 AM
your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2015 11:12:00 AM
- Funom, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/19/2015 6:49:00 AM
When you talk of this kind of love and beauty, it is pleasing to see that it's a collaboration. Just a perfect match that reinforces the subject. It's something special. How does magic like that even happen? It just overwhelms me to think of the symmetry in something like this and how you do it.
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:22:00 AM
- It's true ..... there is something special ...... it's magic ...... could not write such poems unless we were in the same "planet" :)))) - Thank you for the beautiful words, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/14/2015 11:42:00 PM
A smoothly written comforting piece.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2015 3:36:00 AM
- J.R, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/14/2015 11:09:00 AM
Congrats on ur wining my dear Anne lise u surly deserve it... I'm captured by this one truly a breath taking master piece... Always feeling pleasure reading 4 u 2... Hugs :D dalia
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Date: 12/14/2015 12:25:00 PM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/12/2015 9:28:00 AM
Lovely, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 12/13/2015 12:18:00 PM
- James, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2015 5:03:00 PM
congratulations anne lise on poem of the day and for the pleasure of joining pens wishing you a blessed day pal
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Date: 12/10/2015 2:23:00 AM
- I share this honor with you, dear friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2015 9:04:00 AM
Beautiful! A seamless collaboration. Well done, Anne Lise & Liam! Congrats on POTD. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:50:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2015 6:09:00 AM
Anne Lise and Liam, just beautiful and endearing.. soothing and the imagery is lingering!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/9/2015 11:50:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and comments, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 11:17:00 PM
wow! a very beautiful piece
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:12:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and comments, Waweru :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 8:39:00 PM
Way to go! Great choice for POTD. Congrats to you both.
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:11:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 7:16:00 PM
Beautiful , Anne-Lise & Liam, congratulations on poem of the day!
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:11:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful...simply beautiful! Congrats to both of you! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:11:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations Anne Lise and Liam on your Poem of the Day.....
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Date: 12/8/2015 3:10:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 2:48:00 PM
So lovely, Anne-Lise and Liam. A heartfelt congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2015 2:58:00 PM
- Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this awesome piece being picked as the poem of the day!
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:29:00 PM
- And .... thank you for congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 12:02:00 PM
Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous! Straight to my faves.
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:27:00 PM
- Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words + FAV!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 9:31:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!I' m so very happy for you both.Well done!Just awesome!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:26:00 PM
- I'm so very happy, me too ..... and I think Liam as well :))) - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 8:08:00 AM
Another great collaboration! :) Grats on poem of the day
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Date: 12/7/2015 8:46:00 AM
- Casarah glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 6:07:00 AM
This is lovely... congratulations to both of you. ~ Lin ~
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:13:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words and congrats Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/7/2015 12:00:00 AM
Anne-Lise and Liam a wonderful collaboration. Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:04:00 AM
- Michael, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/6/2015 12:52:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam . . . A brilliant collaboration of efforts on this wonderfully rendered Unrhymed Couplet. Written with warm passion, deep feeling, and true radiance. Superb!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:12:00 AM
..... Yes, warm words from our hearts, Gary - Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words + TR/FAV!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/6/2015 12:35:00 PM
both of you can publish a collab book... i am amazed by the wonder of affection with heavenly touches, anne... a sunday's best!.. huggs
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:09:00 AM
- No good business making poetry book in Norway, Nette - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/6/2015 11:58:00 AM
Anne Lise and Liam your pens flow golden words - absolutely delightful couplets:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:06:00 AM
- Jan, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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