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~ that's dashed with pain - frozen tears on the cheek ~ 19.01.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) 9 words 10 syllables howmanysyllables.com

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/23/2018 11:14:00 AM

A worded picture of frozen emotions...very expressive, Anne-Lise! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2018 11:52:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 1/21/2018 8:41:00 PM

A marvelous Monoku Anne-Lise. Your words match the image perfectly. Reality is painful....Maria xxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2018 4:15:00 AM

- Appreciated your lovely comment Maria, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/21/2018 11:51:00 AM

Love your words I am such a soft hearted sensitive sap. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2018 12:07:00 PM

- Appreciate your feedback on my poem, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2018 8:19:00 PM

You captured with words exactly what the picture was showing us, Anne-Lise. I would not want to be that model!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2018 12:06:00 PM

- Thank you Andrea, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/20/2018 8:09:00 AM

Sad and painful... awesome write my dear friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2018 12:03:00 PM

- Appreciated your lovely comment, thank you very much Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/19/2018 5:04:00 PM

The Sun, not only thaws, it is a miraculous healer. This beautiful being, this soul, needs to turn her/his face towards the sun. Beautiful Sunshine Smiles. x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2018 12:02:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Leanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/19/2018 3:35:00 PM

as pain is dashed....a lot of hope is trashed....leaving tears permanently on the face....until the pain has been erased....much said in few words as always anne....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2018 8:17:00 AM

- Thank you my friend Eric, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/19/2018 8:00:00 AM

It's not going away...We must be careful not to cause unnecessary pain...a true challenge in life...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 8:08:00 AM

- So true, Arturo :) - Thank you my friend for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/19/2018 6:33:00 AM

The picture supports your argument.. sad and frozen..well written, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 7:20:00 AM

- Frozen tears shine like diamonds, Vijay - Thank you my friend for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2018 6:18:00 AM

oh this is so sad Anne Lise.... Hope you are ok..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 7:13:00 AM

- From a human being that cries emotional tears, S.O. - Many thanks for compassion and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/19/2018 6:10:00 AM

Marvelous Monoku my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 7:06:00 AM

- Appreciated your lovely comment, thank you very much dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2018 4:39:00 AM

sensitive soul or just a person who is so so hurt their heart is frozen :-) lovely one liner Anne Lise:) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2018 7:04:00 AM

- Maybe both, Jan - Highly appreciate your feedback on my writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)