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Sweet Blue Angel

When the nights are dark and long Held on a slim lunar cradle rocking back and forth Sleep would be merciful unto eyes suffering fate As the lids fall under inside emotions gates To finally make a break free Climbing the highest mountain peaks Some dreams of angels carry the soul away Into a world where butter melts into golden visions Be with me when the night is dark and quiet Waltzing silver shadows eloping stars shooting trails A delicious feeling soars on the winds above the earth Breathless fire burning warm spirit intoxicating timeless Flowing into a universe with song softly dancing joy Happiness warmly glows distant horizons This dark night will soon end As the teardrops greet a new day bathing angels in light A Collaborated Poem 15.01.2016 Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :) (unrhymed quatrain)

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Date: 1/22/2017 9:24:00 AM
I can see Liam's influences here ;) wonderful combination of choice of words, coupled with enchanting imagery....
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:57:00 AM
Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:35:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Funom - Best wishes for a beautiful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/22/2016 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful you two. Makes you get that warm fuzzy feeling as you drift in the night. Love it. love phyl
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 7:18:00 PM
This is totally capturing dear , this is another remarkable collaboration , I salute you both for this breath taking piece , hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:43:00 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Dalia - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 12:05:00 PM
Your words paint a beautiful picture of you soul!
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:19:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, Sarita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 9:33:00 AM
Another delightful collaboration, Anne Lise & Liam! You two travel through the night, keeping each other company, till dawn arrives. #7 Well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for the 7 and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 1:34:00 PM
beautiful words to soothe the soul. Enjoyed much Anne Lise. Take care,
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Date: 1/16/2016 1:50:00 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful comments on our poems, Vincent - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 11:59:00 AM
have a happy moment, anne!... looking forward to your new masterpiece.. huggs
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:09:00 PM
- Best wishes for a wonderful day, Nette :) - hugs from your friend in winter Norway :))
Date: 1/16/2016 12:26:00 AM
This is absolutely a spectacular collaboration in a very beautiful form my very dear Anne! I love every line and the last line is great! Hats off to both of you! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and wonderful weekend! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:07:00 PM
- Dear friend Leonora, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 8:19:00 PM
You bring comfort and happiness where it is needed, Anne and Liam. Congrats on another lovely collab. Enjoy a great weekend! hugs to you both! :-)
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim :) - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 7:05:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, i see the magic still comes from the pens of two most talented poets. You both let your hearts sing and the magic is born right there. You both excell in your collaborations. May your hearts ever sing and the gold of your pens ever run. A definite seven Anne-Lise. Hugs....Vladislav. X
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:03:00 PM
- To share thoughts and words with Liam is a pleasure - Thank you appreciated our writing Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 10:30:00 AM
When started reading the poem, I understood right away it was a collaboration of you and Liam, dear Anne-Lise! You are made for each other as both contribute to the beauty of the poem you create! A seven to each! Bravo!
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:42:00 PM
- Liam and me share the words of hearts, it makes me happy :) .... and it makes me happy to share it with you, dear friend Demetrios - Thank you very much - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 9:57:00 AM
the warmth of hope makes this collab such a delightful read... best to you anne and liam... huggs
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:43:00 PM
- Thanks, glad you enjoy it Nette :) - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 9:26:00 AM
you've captured a dream in words....not easy to do. excellent write from the both of you.
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much, glad you enjoy it Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 8:38:00 AM
the lonely night, to some causes fright but the truth of this plight is it offers inspiring insight to keep us in the fight to elevate our minds to new heights with the art that we write in an effort to shed light with all the heart's might just to confirm what is right....wonderful as always you two....;)
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:03:00 AM
- Thanks, glad you enjoy it Eric - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 7:55:00 AM
A perfect collaboration poem.
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:15:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Miraj :) - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 7:25:00 AM
also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a blessed week
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Date: 1/15/2016 7:24:00 AM
your words mixed golden ink a pleasure sharing pens with you anne lise wishing you a beautiful weekend pal
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:14:00 AM
- Many thanks dear friend - Best wishes for a wonderful day and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 6:32:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration...enjoyed
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:51:00 AM
- Joseph, many thanks for the lovely comments - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 5:58:00 AM
this is what comes when two excellent poet's collaborate, wow! so lovely, well written...you've both done a nice work
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:50:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, W.S. - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2016 5:06:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!I just love it.Just awesome!A true golden gem!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very sweet and beautiful!:))Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Dorian - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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