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The Gift

I gave a gift, he took it, and then he set it aside. Maybe it is too narrow, or maybe it is too wide. The flu is going around, so maybe his voice is hoarse. Maybe it needs a bow. Then he'd know it's a gift, of course. Perhaps he doesn't like it. Then I'd give it to another. I was hoping for a smile. He doesn't even bother. If I had found a bow, I could attach it with some glue. And if it looked real pretty, maybe he could say "Thank you".

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Date: 12/15/2024 5:41:00 AM
It is disappointing that the gift we thoughtfully give to one is not appreciated. I can relate to your feelings, dear Hilda.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/15/2024 5:58:00 AM
Thank you. It is based on a true incident.
Date: 2/22/2024 6:04:00 AM
It's sad that some people don't appreciate gestures of kindness...
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/22/2024 6:45:00 AM
It happens more often today. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 12/29/2023 6:24:00 PM
Lovely write tender emotions throughout loved reading this one.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 12/29/2023 6:56:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/28/2023 11:56:00 PM
Aww Hilda, this makes me sad (a little) even metaphorically. Best Cindy x
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/29/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 9/30/2023 8:11:00 AM
Cliche but true, "It's the thought that counts". Some people just can't be pleased. I do like the rhyme, Hilda.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 9/30/2023 2:56:00 PM
Thanks again.
Date: 9/28/2023 2:38:00 PM
Fun enjoyed the rhyme.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 9/28/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thank you.

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