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Sun and Sand Minichu

on a tropical Isle sunshine and sand with cool waters aquamarine makes me smile while in the sea a crustacean that was unseen nipped me no slouch I fled the scene ouch on a tropical Isle a crustacean that was unseen ouch Sponsor Mohan Chutani. 1 / 27 / 2021. .

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Date: 2/5/2021 2:16:00 PM
I would think that would be painful and possibly dangerous since it probably drew blood inviting sharks to come in. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:59:00 AM
Ha! I love this George - sand and sea has it's own thorns. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/3/2021 3:27:00 AM
George, thanx for participating in my contest and describing the adventures one can have on the sea front through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan
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