George Seal Poet Rhyme

Sun and Sand Minichu

on a tropical Isle
    sunshine and sand with cool waters aquamarine
    makes me smile

    while in the sea
    a crustacean that was unseen
    nipped me

    no slouch
    I fled the scene
    ouch

    on a tropical Isle
    a crustacean that was unseen
    ouch

    Sponsor Mohan Chutani.

    1 / 27 / 2021.
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Sara Kendrick February 5, 2021 at 2:16 PM I would think that would be painful and possibly dangerous since it probably drew blood inviting sharks to come in. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler February 3, 2021 at 6:59 AM Ha! I love this George - sand and sea has it's own thorns. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2021 at 3:27 AM George, thanx for participating in my contest and describing the adventures one can have on the sea front through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan