Fantasy

Sailing the oceans of my mind, I dream that I am free, No compass tells me where I am, or where I ought to be. 9 / 27 / 21

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2021 7:03:00 AM

Excellent, George! Congratulations!

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 9/29/2021 7:49:00 PM

That's true freedom. Congratulations on this fine couplet, George. Carol Louise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:09:00 PM

wow, not just great imagery but great message too. BIG congrats

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2021 12:17:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win George:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/28/2021 12:12:00 PM

Love this, George! As a lover of the ocean and all that it entails, I am right with you here in spirit! :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/28/2021 9:45:00 AM

A wonderful poem, george. Congratulations on your placement out of fifty entries. Superb!!!

Ann Peck

Date: 9/28/2021 9:04:00 AM

Sailing~freedom! Beautifully penned. Congratulations!

Wendy Watson

Date: 9/27/2021 1:46:00 PM

I just loved this George both for the sense of liberty evoked and the rhythm and rhyme employed.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 12:43:00 PM

lovely lines George:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/27/2021 12:43:00 PM

I call that FAITH - a confident feeling that all is in order, God has got you! God's love is the only compass any person needs. I love the wording - succinct and creative. Please know that I am not religious, but I AM spiritual. If I got the wrong meaning from your lines, let me keep them for I like the warmth it gave me. ... CayCay