Fantasy

Sailing the oceans of my mind, I dream that I am free,
    No compass tells me where I am, or where I ought to be.

    9 / 27 / 21
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Excellent, George! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 5:09 PM
wow, not just great imagery but great message too. BIG congrats
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win George:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Love this, George! As a lover of the ocean and all that it entails, I am right with you here in spirit! :)
Hankins Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 9:45 AM
A wonderful poem, george. Congratulations on your placement out of fifty entries. Superb!!!
Peck Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Sailing~freedom! Beautifully penned. Congratulations!
Watson Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 1:46 PM
I just loved this George both for the sense of liberty evoked and the rhythm and rhyme employed.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 12:43 PM
lovely lines George:-) hugs jan xx
Godwin Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 12:43 PM
I call that FAITH - a confident feeling that all is in order, God has got you! God's love is the only compass any person needs. I love the wording - succinct and creative. Please know that I am not religious, but I AM spiritual. If I got the wrong meaning from your lines, let me keep them for I like the warmth it gave me. ... CayCay
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