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There is nothing better than seeing that smile! Her crinkled nose and effortless style Chiclet perfect and care free The best way to be Angelic She With her clique They just walk by me It appears I'm hard to see Still I choose to stick around a while There is nothing better than seeing that smile! A school boy's nightmare, occupying the space outside the friend zone. For Andrea's new form contest. A name for the form: Double Triangulation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/9/2015 9:04:00 AM
Well done Richard :) I love your work. Hug "B"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks so much. ;0)
Date: 3/5/2015 10:15:00 AM
Cool design!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Jessica.
Date: 2/28/2015 5:55:00 AM
Always elated when you win, Richard. Makes me so happy. :)
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:01:00 AM
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Date: 2/27/2015 10:57:00 PM
Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:10:00 PM
The flow is perfect Richard, way to ace the new form, big congrats on a wonderful write. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia.
Date: 2/24/2015 7:32:00 AM
Like your take on this new form, Richard. You take me a long way Back! A very deserved high winning spot. [I messed mine, for I did not notice the rhyme of central word.] Congratulations! // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I got it wrong and Becca pointed out my error so I rewrote the piece.
Date: 2/24/2015 12:31:00 AM
Fantastic write Richard,, love the name of the form too,, Congrats on big win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 2/24/2015 12:09:00 AM
Richard, I mentioned your name for my form at my blog but it was not my favorite. I am probably going with Andaree Etheree!!
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Date: 2/23/2015 5:14:00 PM
Richard, love the metaphor of the checklist. I wonder if they still make them? It would seem we've all had this outside the box experiences a one time or another. great take on the theme.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:29:00 PM
Thanks John , I corrected the title.
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John lawless
Date: 2/23/2015 5:16:00 PM
the checklist is the soup spellcheck showing its youth and not remembering the tasty gum - chicklits - of the 50's and 60's.
Date: 2/23/2015 4:21:00 PM
Hi Richard, I loved your poem! Poor love-struck school boy...Congrats on your nice win! Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 2/23/2015 11:53:00 AM
Congrats on a great win..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 2/23/2015 11:06:00 AM
Congrats Richard. Nice win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Abdul!
Date: 2/23/2015 9:52:00 AM
The first thing that came to mind, was seeing my kids, after their braces were removed !! A shiny chicklet smile......Well Worth the $$$ spent!!! Sweet poem, Richard......congratulations!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
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Date: 2/23/2015 9:47:00 AM
Lovely!!You've taken me back in time to school days romance.What a feeling!Charma
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine.
Date: 2/23/2015 7:35:00 AM
This was cool, great job with the new form my friend and grats on your win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Casarah. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/23/2015 1:47:00 AM
Sorry I missed this Richard - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 7:50:00 AM
No worries, thanks Jan.
Date: 2/23/2015 12:11:00 AM
Oh richard, So good to see you here near the very top of my list. I just adored this cute poem you wrote about high school angst. Congratulations. it was so clever, so fresh.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 7:50:00 AM
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:43:00 PM
Nicely done Richard and I like the name you have given Andrea new form. Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Verlena, hopefully she will like it as well.
Date: 2/14/2015 8:08:00 AM
Fantastic! You have perfectly described a nightmare shared by many young people.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 9:06:00 AM
Fo me this was middle school, thankfuly by high school things improved dramatically.
Date: 2/14/2015 7:30:00 AM
Excellent effort, Richard! If i was judging the contest you would be a most serious contender for top spot with this poem. It has a very "Robert Frost" feel to it (my favourite poet)...Top Drawer!! :) john.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 7:49:00 AM
Wow John Thanks so much.
Date: 2/13/2015 10:23:00 PM
Boy....your muse is in full force! Lovely. Good luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 1:34:00 AM
I hope I got it right. The first one I wrote didn't rhyme so I had to give this one another try.