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She Is Chiclet Perfection

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There is nothing better than seeing that smile! Her crinkled nose and effortless style Chiclet perfect and care free The best way to be Angelic She With her clique They just walk by me It appears I'm hard to see Still I choose to stick around a while There is nothing better than seeing that smile! A school boy's nightmare, occupying the space outside the friend zone. For Andrea's new form contest. A name for the form: Double Triangulation.

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/3/2021 6:15:00 AM

Hey Richard, That's a good one. Name is cool.. Poem is cool.. I like it. Congratulations on your win

BE Bailey

Date: 3/9/2015 9:04:00 AM

Well done Richard :) I love your work. Hug "B"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2015 9:17:00 AM

Thanks so much. ;0)

Butterfly Mantra

Date: 3/5/2015 10:15:00 AM

Cool design!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2015 1:56:00 PM

Thanks Jessica.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/28/2015 5:55:00 AM

Always elated when you win, Richard. Makes me so happy. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2015 8:01:00 AM

;0)

Skat A

Date: 2/27/2015 10:57:00 PM

Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 2/24/2015 3:10:00 PM

The flow is perfect Richard, way to ace the new form, big congrats on a wonderful write. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2015 8:58:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/24/2015 7:32:00 AM

Like your take on this new form, Richard. You take me a long way Back! A very deserved high winning spot. [I messed mine, for I did not notice the rhyme of central word.] Congratulations! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I got it wrong and Becca pointed out my error so I rewrote the piece.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/24/2015 12:31:00 AM

Fantastic write Richard,, love the name of the form too,, Congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2015 12:09:00 AM

Richard, I mentioned your name for my form at my blog but it was not my favorite. I am probably going with Andaree Etheree!!

John Lawless

Date: 2/23/2015 5:14:00 PM

Richard, love the metaphor of the checklist. I wonder if they still make them? It would seem we've all had this outside the box experiences a one time or another. great take on the theme.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:29:00 PM

Thanks John , I corrected the title.

John Lawless
Date: 2/23/2015 5:16:00 PM

the checklist is the soup spellcheck showing its youth and not remembering the tasty gum - chicklits - of the 50's and 60's.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/23/2015 4:21:00 PM

Hi Richard, I loved your poem! Poor love-struck school boy...Congrats on your nice win! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:29:00 PM

Thanks Sandra!

Joseph May

Date: 2/23/2015 11:53:00 AM

Congrats on a great win..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Joseph.

Abdul Malik

Date: 2/23/2015 11:06:00 AM

Congrats Richard. Nice win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Abdul!

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/23/2015 9:52:00 AM

The first thing that came to mind, was seeing my kids, after their braces were removed !! A shiny chicklet smile......Well Worth the $$$ spent!!! Sweet poem, Richard......congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 9:53:00 AM

;0)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/23/2015 9:47:00 AM

Lovely!!You've taken me back in time to school days romance.What a feeling!Charma

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 9:53:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine.

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/23/2015 7:35:00 AM

This was cool, great job with the new form my friend and grats on your win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 7:51:00 AM

Thanks Casarah. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2015 1:47:00 AM

Sorry I missed this Richard - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 7:50:00 AM

No worries, thanks Jan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2015 12:11:00 AM

Oh richard, So good to see you here near the very top of my list. I just adored this cute poem you wrote about high school angst. Congratulations. it was so clever, so fresh.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 7:50:00 AM

;0)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/14/2015 12:43:00 PM

Nicely done Richard and I like the name you have given Andrea new form. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 12:51:00 PM

Thanks Verlena, hopefully she will like it as well.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/14/2015 8:08:00 AM

Fantastic! You have perfectly described a nightmare shared by many young people.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 9:06:00 AM

Fo me this was middle school, thankfuly by high school things improved dramatically.

John Fleming

Date: 2/14/2015 7:30:00 AM

Excellent effort, Richard! If i was judging the contest you would be a most serious contender for top spot with this poem. It has a very "Robert Frost" feel to it (my favourite poet)...Top Drawer!! :) john.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 7:49:00 AM

Wow John Thanks so much.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/13/2015 10:23:00 PM

Boy....your muse is in full force! Lovely. Good luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 1:34:00 AM

I hope I got it right. The first one I wrote didn't rhyme so I had to give this one another try.