Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

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She Is Chiclet Perfection

There is nothing better than seeing that smile!
       Her crinkled nose and effortless style
             Chiclet perfect and care free
                   The best way to be
                           Angelic
                              She
                       With her clique 
                  They just walk by me
              It appears I'm hard to see
       Still I choose to stick around a while
There is nothing better than seeing that smile!



A school boy's nightmare, occupying the space outside the friend zone.

For Andrea's new form contest.

A name for the form: Double Triangulation.

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Paghunda Zahid November 3, 2021 at 6:15 AM Hey Richard, That's a good one. Name is cool.. Poem is cool.. I like it. Congratulations on your win

BE Bailey March 9, 2015 at 9:04 AM Well done Richard :) I love your work. Hug "B" Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2015 at 9:17 AM Thanks so much. ;0)

Butterfly Mantra March 5, 2015 at 10:15 AM Cool design! Richard Lamoureux March 5, 2015 at 1:56 PM Thanks Jessica.

Eileen Manassian February 28, 2015 at 5:55 AM Always elated when you win, Richard. Makes me so happy. :) Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2015 at 8:01 AM ;0)

Skat A February 27, 2015 at 10:57 PM Richard, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Cecilia Macfarlane February 24, 2015 at 3:10 PM The flow is perfect Richard, way to ace the new form, big congrats on a wonderful write. Hugs Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2015 at 8:58 PM Thanks Cecilia.

Paul Callus February 24, 2015 at 7:32 AM Like your take on this new form, Richard. You take me a long way Back! A very deserved high winning spot. [I messed mine, for I did not notice the rhyme of central word.] Congratulations! // paul Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2015 at 8:23 AM Thanks Paul, I got it wrong and Becca pointed out my error so I rewrote the piece.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 12:31 AM Fantastic write Richard,, love the name of the form too,, Congrats on big win! Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2015 at 8:24 AM Thanks Upma.

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2015 at 12:09 AM Richard, I mentioned your name for my form at my blog but it was not my favorite. I am probably going with Andaree Etheree!!

John Lawless February 23, 2015 at 5:14 PM Richard, love the metaphor of the checklist. I wonder if they still make them? It would seem we've all had this outside the box experiences a one time or another. great take on the theme. Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 5:29 PM Thanks John , I corrected the title. John Lawless February 23, 2015 at 5:16 PM the checklist is the soup spellcheck showing its youth and not remembering the tasty gum - chicklits - of the 50's and 60's.

Sandra Haight February 23, 2015 at 4:21 PM Hi Richard, I loved your poem! Poor love-struck school boy...Congrats on your nice win! Sandra Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 5:29 PM Thanks Sandra!

Joseph May February 23, 2015 at 11:53 AM Congrats on a great win.. Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 11:58 AM Thanks Joseph.

Abdul Malik Mandani February 23, 2015 at 11:06 AM Congrats Richard. Nice win. Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 11:51 AM Thanks Abdul!

Carrie Richards February 23, 2015 at 9:52 AM The first thing that came to mind, was seeing my kids, after their braces were removed !! A shiny chicklet smile......Well Worth the $$$ spent!!! Sweet poem, Richard......congratulations! Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 9:53 AM ;0)

Charmaine Chircop February 23, 2015 at 9:47 AM Lovely!!You've taken me back in time to school days romance.What a feeling!Charma Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 9:53 AM Thanks Charmaine.

Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:35 AM This was cool, great job with the new form my friend and grats on your win! Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 7:51 AM Thanks Casarah. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 1:47 AM Sorry I missed this Richard - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 7:50 AM No worries, thanks Jan.

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 12:11 AM Oh richard, So good to see you here near the very top of my list. I just adored this cute poem you wrote about high school angst. Congratulations. it was so clever, so fresh. Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 7:50 AM ;0)

Verlena S. Walker February 14, 2015 at 12:43 PM Nicely done Richard and I like the name you have given Andrea new form. Verlena Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2015 at 12:51 PM Thanks Verlena, hopefully she will like it as well.

Monterey Sirak February 14, 2015 at 8:08 AM Fantastic! You have perfectly described a nightmare shared by many young people. Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2015 at 9:06 AM Fo me this was middle school, thankfuly by high school things improved dramatically.

John Fleming February 14, 2015 at 7:30 AM Excellent effort, Richard! If i was judging the contest you would be a most serious contender for top spot with this poem. It has a very "Robert Frost" feel to it (my favourite poet)...Top Drawer!! :) john. Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2015 at 7:49 AM Wow John Thanks so much.

Eileen Manassian February 13, 2015 at 10:23 PM Boy....your muse is in full force! Lovely. Good luck in the contest. Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2015 at 1:34 AM I hope I got it right. The first one I wrote didn't rhyme so I had to give this one another try.