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Let it be

' World of Insanity Cold war,main destiny, Death is the symphony, Blood shed and heroes be Great men in history. Mourn's drums in melody, No peace for you and me. If only it could be not just a fantasy lit candles by the sea White flags of Victory Nations in Harmony One world,One family the voice of let it be. I was inspired by Carolyn Devonshire's last contest,a Monorhyme with a message, I don't know if this poem passes as a Monorhyme.. I tried.. and the message is for peace.. Inspired by the BEATLES song too..Let it be... One of my favourite songs.. Charma

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Date: 1/5/2012 9:36:00 AM
Wonderful poem you have here, Charma!! I sure missed you here and I saw you on Linda's poem :) I hope all is well with you, dear friend :D hugs to you!
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:00:00 AM
I like the melody in this poem from the song by the Beetles. This is very inspiring. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:27:00 PM
It is a dream that some have to have peace with each other...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:26:00 PM
Charmaine, thank you for the lovely message in your Monorrhyme, it's wonderful. I agree with Ruben, they are three wonderful tracks. Let It Be & Yesterday were written by Paul, but credited to Lennon/McCartney and Imagine is soley John's. It was written after the Beatle's split up. It's allegedly based on Yoko Ono's poetry in reaction to her childhood days in Japan during WWII.
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Date: 5/29/2010 6:41:00 AM
I think the message in your poem is very beautiful. I love the Beatles song. Let it Be. Yes, it is too bad the world cannot live in peace, but we can only try, in our only little world, to be, one with peace. Constance
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Date: 5/29/2010 5:09:00 AM
I bhalu tajjeb hafna, Charma! Nicely written poem! Life would be so easy if we all would be one family and one world! Enjoyed reading it! L-ahjar u l-Hadd sabih...Gert
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Date: 5/29/2010 1:38:00 AM
This is amazing, Charma. Not only is the poem beautiful, but there is a great message being sent out.
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Date: 5/28/2010 8:28:00 PM
A lovely poem from a lovely person and poetess .. yet I sense something wrong between your lines dear sweet friend Charma... soup mail me.. I am watching the fireworks tonight from the boardwalk cafe close to the beach over the ocean.. the boat races were this afternoon to start the Memorial Day weekend... tell me what has happened... and I see comments below ... and hope u do not feel upset but complimented for your talent... soup mail me for Saturday ... luv Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:51:00 PM
It's definitely a wonderful lyrical write.
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Date: 5/28/2010 12:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Charma. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:30:00 AM
As a pacifist, I really enjoyed the message and hope all men will one day realize we are part of "one family." And this is definity a monorhyme. Well done, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
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