Charmaine Chircop Poet Monorhyme

Let It Be

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                                            World of Insanity
                                          Cold war,main destiny,
                                          Death is the symphony,
                                         Blood shed and heroes be
                                           Great men in history.
                                         Mourn's drums in melody,
                                         No peace for you and me.
                                     
                                             If only it could be
                                              not just a fantasy
                                             lit candles by the sea
                                             White  flags of Victory
                                             Nations in Harmony
                                             One world,One family
                                              the voice of let it be.

                                         
             I was inspired by Carolyn Devonshire's  last contest,a Monorhyme with a message,
I don't know if this poem passes as a Monorhyme.. I tried.. and the message is for peace..
Inspired by the BEATLES  song too..Let it be... One of my favourite songs.. Charma

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Anonomus Scorpio October 4, 2023 at 11:56 AM I found myself looking for a place to read serenity. On this day it lead me to a poem by thee. A fine example of monorhyme this is definitively. Enjoyed I did this "let it be" Warmly A.S.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 5, 2012 at 9:36 AM Wonderful poem you have here, Charma!! I sure missed you here and I saw you on Linda's poem :) I hope all is well with you, dear friend :D hugs to you!

Joseph Spence Sr May 31, 2010 at 7:00 AM I like the melody in this poem from the song by the Beetles. This is very inspiring. Great job! Joseph

Sara Kendrick May 30, 2010 at 1:27 PM It is a dream that some have to have peace with each other...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

James Fraser May 30, 2010 at 1:26 PM Charmaine, thank you for the lovely message in your Monorrhyme, it's wonderful. I agree with Ruben, they are three wonderful tracks. Let It Be & Yesterday were written by Paul, but credited to Lennon/McCartney and Imagine is soley John's. It was written after the Beatle's split up. It's allegedly based on Yoko Ono's poetry in reaction to her childhood days in Japan during WWII.

Constance La France May 29, 2010 at 6:41 AM I think the message in your poem is very beautiful. I love the Beatles song. Let it Be. Yes, it is too bad the world cannot live in peace, but we can only try, in our only little world, to be, one with peace. Constance

Gert W. Knop May 29, 2010 at 5:09 AM I bhalu tajjeb hafna, Charma! Nicely written poem! Life would be so easy if we all would be one family and one world! Enjoyed reading it! L-ahjar u l-Hadd sabih...Gert

Amy Green May 29, 2010 at 1:38 AM This is amazing, Charma. Not only is the poem beautiful, but there is a great message being sent out.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 28, 2010 at 8:28 PM A lovely poem from a lovely person and poetess .. yet I sense something wrong between your lines dear sweet friend Charma... soup mail me.. I am watching the fireworks tonight from the boardwalk cafe close to the beach over the ocean.. the boat races were this afternoon to start the Memorial Day weekend... tell me what has happened... and I see comments below ... and hope u do not feel upset but complimented for your talent... soup mail me for Saturday ... luv Linda-Marie..

John Rhinem May 28, 2010 at 7:31 PM ...."May 'Your Dreams' Be Filled With Beauty, As Beautiful As 'You Are, Beautiful, Charma Charmaine!!!!'" ~ Smile, "Goodnight Dear Cinderella!":)

John Rhinem May 28, 2010 at 7:29 PM ....Aside from it all and, somewhere very very deep inside!!? Smile, I also truly love "Your" title and its reference within part to The Beatles! ~ Smile, "Your Beautiful Poem" also makes me think of John Lennon's song, "Imagine" ~ "You Are 'So Beautiful,' &, This Is A Beautiful Write, Flowing Within, So Much Light!!!" ~ Smile, "My Love, 'Always & Forever, To You' & Your Loves, Eternally," John!....Cont....

John Rhinem May 28, 2010 at 7:19 PM ...."Your" muse of thought centered upon those struggling just to survive about "You," while as "Your Beauty" was expressing the feelings of less deserving for living within comforts above their own....Smile, that's when "I Knew, 'That You Were Beautiful Indeed!!!'" ~ Smile, and here we are again, wherein nothing has truly changed from within side "Your Precious Beauty!!!" ~ This is a very lovely write dear; an emotion which stands for most I believe....Cont....

John Rhinem May 28, 2010 at 7:08 PM ....Smile, I see that I have unfortunately been broken up already from below and, I haven't even made it out of the earths atmosphere yet; hmm? Smile, but I do remember dear as if it were yesterday, the first time that I saw this write which gave myself a distant glimpse of "Your Beauty" ~ It encompassed "Yourself & 'Your Beautiful Love,'" and "Your" concerns for the sufferage of those less fortunate which were near and far from "Your Beautiful Treasures!!!"....Cont....

John Rhinem May 28, 2010 at 6:53 PM ....Smile, getting back to "This Magnificent Reflection Of 'Your Beautiful Heart & Soul,' placed gently upon this canvas of "Your Many Vibrant Colours Of Pure & Innocent Love;" again one of the countless things that drew my enchanted eyes to "Your Endless Beauty" was, "Your Precious Prose & Rhymes," filled with compartments of compassions for the plights of humanity and, all of creation itself dear lady!!!....Cont....

Dr.Ram Mehta May 28, 2010 at 6:51 PM It's definitely a wonderful lyrical write.

John Rhinem May 28, 2010 at 6:37 PM Smile, what a very beautiful poem this is, of longings love and hope for all within this life! Smile, it somewhat reminds me of when "Your Splendors" first came here to The Soup dear lady; which again, is amid one of the very first things that drew myself unto "Your Beauty" here within this place! ~ Smile, "Good Evening 'Gifted & Beautiful Charma Charmaine!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Day" has been going perfectly for "You" my dear!!!?....Cont....

Carol Sunshine Brown May 28, 2010 at 12:29 PM Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Charma. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire May 28, 2010 at 9:30 AM As a pacifist, I really enjoyed the message and hope all men will one day realize we are part of "one family." And this is definity a monorhyme. Well done, dear friend! Love, Carolyn