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I dont want to hurt you, but I think I will, I want to eat your body , Like a jagged little pill. I will break you down , as you fall apart , and then I'll work my way into your wicked heart, I will make you crumble , as you'r falling down , and when I cover you silence the only sound.. James ....................................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/12/2011 3:53:00 PM
Nice little write with some good rhyming. There are two small corrections needed: In the first line of the second verse, "brake" should be "break". In the second line of the third verse, "your" should be either "you're" or "you are".
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:35:00 PM
A haunting write, excellent piece.
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