Crumble

I dont want to hurt you, 
                                                 but I think I will,
                                                 I want to eat your body ,
                                               Like a jagged little pill.

                                             I will break you down ,
                                                as you fall apart ,
                                              and then I'll work my way
                                              into your wicked heart,

                                              I will make you crumble ,
                                                as you'r falling down ,
                                                and when I cover you 
                                                 silence the only sound..



                                                         James ....................................................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 3:53 PM
Nice little write with some good rhyming. There are two small corrections needed: In the first line of the second verse, "brake" should be "break". In the second line of the third verse, "your" should be either "you're" or "you are".
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February 12, 2011 at 3:35 PM
A haunting write, excellent piece.
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