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- I Need You -

I have sweet thoughts The thoughts goes to you My tears comforted by you The pleasure is great when I have you The delights you give me when I'm happy My eyes sparkle when I look at you My mouth runs in water I just have to taste you My own love and sin Only by a small touch Feel my lips cools down A sprinkling of chocolate on top My delicious vanilla ice cream I need you ... NOW! 13.08.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Owen Van Der Schyf

Date: 4/7/2016 6:56:00 AM

You think it goes one way then it turns. Imaginative

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/7/2016 8:43:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit and comments, Owen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Garg

Date: 1/15/2014 6:30:00 AM

Anne its very sweet of you. The way tou turned after sixth line is superb... !! 'I need you ... NOW!'--is really real... I enjoyed it from the begining to end. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2014 6:40:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Archana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Ludden

Date: 9/20/2013 9:47:00 AM

The element of surprise is always a winner!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2013 9:50:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit and comments,Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 9/4/2013 7:36:00 AM

Wow! Exposing the feeling buried within every soul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 7:56:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit and comments, Wilfred. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/30/2013 3:12:00 AM

A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2013 5:22:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit and comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Remelan Nepomuceno

Date: 8/29/2013 6:35:00 AM

Rhetorical! I liked it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2013 6:41:00 AM

- Remelan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Nair

Date: 8/24/2013 11:37:00 AM

It's when you melt down/ That i start/ This flow is sure an art/ The designs it weaves/ These eyes' in for a treat/ The ice cream was just/ A passing part/

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2013 11:42:00 AM

- Vijay, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/20/2013 4:25:00 PM

Mmmm sounds yummy and sexy the same time. I want some of that. LOL Nicely written Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/21/2013 3:10:00 AM

- Phyllis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/20/2013 2:09:00 AM

Now I want some Vanilla. Sweet.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/20/2013 2:23:00 AM

- Alozor Michael, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/19/2013 11:28:00 AM

Yummy!!! can I have it? I think I need it also :) thanks for this very delicious poem of yours friend Anne. Very creative. Have a great day always. Hugs, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 11:34:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Maria, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/16/2013 10:42:00 AM

mmmmmmm----------delicious in every way....in metaphor or reality.....I love it!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 10:53:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Carrie, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/16/2013 6:49:00 AM

It nice to know that you have cherished these wonderful feelings. They are evident in your writings. Life is not all well and rosy for others...I live in a realistic world and observed and experience daily happenings. I always enjoy reading your love poems. If that's what's keep you glowing...keep shining my dear.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 7:10:00 AM

- Even if the world is not a happy and rosy ..... I like to be "happy" in my poems - Spread joy and forget the sorrow ...- Thanks for your visit and your comments Christine, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/15/2013 4:17:00 PM

Ohhh... your words make my mouth water for ice cream and... for you ;-) A poem of longing... wonderful... Terry (and thank you, Anne Lise, for your kind comments)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 1:26:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Terry, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/15/2013 3:49:00 PM

I love this one both front and backwards, it flows perfectly...a playful yet romantic poem...I suddenly want ice-cream :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 1:26:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Sandra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2013 2:47:00 PM

very cute and romantic passion play!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 1:25:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Andrea, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2013 1:13:00 PM

i'll have cookies and cream ice-cream for friday, anne.... i NEED to.. happy day and thanks for coming around...:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 1:25:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Nette, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/15/2013 12:25:00 PM

Ahh a Great passion poem...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 12:39:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/15/2013 11:27:00 AM

You have beautifully revealed in this passionate write the feelings of a carving body and mind, more so as you have given a flavor of ice-cream and chocolate also. Sweet Poem Anne on the need of Love and its feelings. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra…Anne L A

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 11:32:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravindra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/15/2013 11:12:00 AM

Wow! Awesome! I love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 11:19:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Alozor. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/15/2013 8:31:00 AM

Wonderful-- starting off as a passionate love scenario-- that love evolving to the decadent but delicious chocolate ice cream. Great write as always. Xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 9:50:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 8/15/2013 8:22:00 AM

I love the sprinkling of chocolate on top of vanilla ice cream. A very romantic image... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 9:50:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Jack - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery

Date: 8/15/2013 6:32:00 AM

I love vanilla and I loved this delicious poem..:) My dear Anne ur words are always admired ..ur too sweet ....cheers !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 6:42:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Red, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2013 4:55:00 AM

I enjoyed this wonderful write Anne....the ending was sweet....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 5:02:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/15/2013 4:45:00 AM

" I need you" Very refreshing write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 4:54:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravi, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Asokumar Panangad

Date: 8/15/2013 12:24:00 AM

How cleverly words used! Good Anne, I enjoyed the reading of it. ASOKUMAR

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 1:46:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Asokumar. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)