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- I Need You -

I have sweet thoughts
                                       The thoughts goes to you
                                       My tears comforted by you
                               The pleasure is great when I have you
                             The delights you give me when I'm happy
                                My eyes sparkle when I look at you
                                        My mouth runs in water
                                        I just have to taste you
                                           My own love and sin                        
                                          Only by a small touch
                                        Feel my lips cools down
                                   A sprinkling of chocolate on top
                                    My delicious vanilla ice cream
                                          I need you ... NOW!





13.08.2013
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Owen Van Der Schyf Date: 4/7/2016 6:56:00 AM You think it goes one way then it turns. Imaginative Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2016 8:43:00 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments, Owen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Garg Date: 1/15/2014 6:30:00 AM Anne its very sweet of you. The way tou turned after sixth line is superb... !! 'I need you ... NOW!'--is really real... I enjoyed it from the begining to end. :)) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2014 6:40:00 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Archana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Ludden Date: 9/20/2013 9:47:00 AM The element of surprise is always a winner! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2013 9:50:00 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments,Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilfred Aniagyei Date: 9/4/2013 7:36:00 AM Wow! Exposing the feeling buried within every soul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2013 7:56:00 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments, Wilfred. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 8/30/2013 3:12:00 AM A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/30/2013 5:22:00 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Remelan Nepomuceno Date: 8/29/2013 6:35:00 AM Rhetorical! I liked it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2013 6:41:00 AM - Remelan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Nair Date: 8/24/2013 11:37:00 AM It's when you melt down/ That i start/ This flow is sure an art/ The designs it weaves/ These eyes' in for a treat/ The ice cream was just/ A passing part/ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2013 11:42:00 AM - Vijay, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 8/20/2013 4:25:00 PM Mmmm sounds yummy and sexy the same time. I want some of that. LOL Nicely written Anne Lise. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2013 3:10:00 AM - Phyllis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu Date: 8/20/2013 2:09:00 AM Now I want some Vanilla. Sweet. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2013 2:23:00 AM - Alozor Michael, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway Date: 8/19/2013 11:28:00 AM Yummy!!! can I have it? I think I need it also :) thanks for this very delicious poem of yours friend Anne. Very creative. Have a great day always. Hugs, :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2013 11:34:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Maria, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards Date: 8/16/2013 10:42:00 AM mmmmmmm----------delicious in every way....in metaphor or reality.....I love it!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 10:53:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carrie, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Christine Phillips Date: 8/16/2013 6:49:00 AM It nice to know that you have cherished these wonderful feelings. They are evident in your writings. Life is not all well and rosy for others...I live in a realistic world and observed and experience daily happenings. I always enjoy reading your love poems. If that's what's keep you glowing...keep shining my dear. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 7:10:00 AM - Even if the world is not a happy and rosy ..... I like to be "happy" in my poems - Spread joy and forget the sorrow ...- Thanks for your visit and your comments Christine, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary Date: 8/15/2013 4:17:00 PM Ohhh... your words make my mouth water for ice cream and... for you ;-) A poem of longing... wonderful... Terry (and thank you, Anne Lise, for your kind comments) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 1:26:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Terry, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 8/15/2013 3:49:00 PM I love this one both front and backwards, it flows perfectly...a playful yet romantic poem...I suddenly want ice-cream :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 1:26:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Sandra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/15/2013 2:47:00 PM very cute and romantic passion play!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 1:25:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Andrea, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/15/2013 1:13:00 PM i'll have cookies and cream ice-cream for friday, anne.... i NEED to.. happy day and thanks for coming around...:) huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2013 1:25:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Nette, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman Date: 8/15/2013 12:25:00 PM Ahh a Great passion poem... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 12:39:00 PM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 8/15/2013 11:27:00 AM You have beautifully revealed in this passionate write the feelings of a carving body and mind, more so as you have given a flavor of ice-cream and chocolate also. Sweet Poem Anne on the need of Love and its feelings. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra…Anne L A Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 11:32:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravindra, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu Date: 8/15/2013 11:12:00 AM Wow! Awesome! I love it! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 11:19:00 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Alozor. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda Date: 8/15/2013 8:31:00 AM Wonderful-- starting off as a passionate love scenario-- that love evolving to the decadent but delicious chocolate ice cream. Great write as always. Xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 9:50:00 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan Date: 8/15/2013 8:22:00 AM I love the sprinkling of chocolate on top of vanilla ice cream. A very romantic image... Jack Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 9:50:00 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Jack - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery Date: 8/15/2013 6:32:00 AM I love vanilla and I loved this delicious poem..:) My dear Anne ur words are always admired ..ur too sweet ....cheers ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 6:42:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Red, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 8/15/2013 4:55:00 AM I enjoyed this wonderful write Anne....the ending was sweet....hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 5:02:00 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/15/2013 4:45:00 AM " I need you" Very refreshing write. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 4:54:00 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments Ravi, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Asokumar Panangad Date: 8/15/2013 12:24:00 AM How cleverly words used! Good Anne, I enjoyed the reading of it. ASOKUMAR Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 1:46:00 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Asokumar. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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