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- Haiku X 230 - Autumn Breath -

the mood is autumn
                   greedy wind makes cold bare trees -
                                   hands deep in pocket


                   the leaf veins are dry
                   beauty in fading nature -
                                   sleeping by the fire






28.09.2022
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Poem of the Day : 29.09.2022

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2022 10:13:00 AM love that first one with "hands in pocket" line!!! Great job Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2022 10:13:00 AM I see it's a POTD. Congrats for that. Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 10/1/2022 5:29:00 AM Anne-Lise. a belated congratulations on your POTD, Happy Saturday xxoo Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/30/2022 1:42:00 PM I remember the warm fireplace on autumn and winter eves. I enjoyed reading this one which brought back memories of the past. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/30/2022 11:49:00 AM Congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 9/30/2022 10:06:00 AM Congratulations Dear Anne-lise this was so wonderful to read. I love this Haiku of yours. Big Congratulations on receiving Poem Of The Day it is a great honor to do so and you deserve such an honor with this delighful Poetry of yours. God bless you... Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 9/30/2022 5:19:00 AM Great haiku and eye catching image. Congratulations Smile, on your well deserved POTD Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2022 3:35:00 AM Fits the mood perfectly, dear. I loved reading your haiku! The imagery is great!Thank you so much for your visit to my work. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Mccann Date: 9/29/2022 4:12:00 PM Great haiku. Every line is a stunning statement in itself. Dry leaf veins, greedy wind, well, all of them. Not only talent, but presence. Elizabeth Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/29/2022 4:09:00 PM Yes, I agree... "the mood is autumn." Leaves are changing into vibrant colors and the "wind makes cold bare trees." This time of year is beautiful, festive and beyond captivating. You have created a Masterpiece with your words. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/29/2022 1:57:00 PM Excellent haiku! Congrats on POTD, Sunshine Smile! Janice Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 9/29/2022 1:50:00 PM Congratulations on POTD Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 9/29/2022 1:42:00 PM Congratulations Sunshine for such a well deserved POTD…the beauty and reality of Autumn described beautifully…..Debx Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/29/2022 1:28:00 PM Congratulations, Anne-Lise!! My fav line was..,”hands in pockets!” So true!! Enjoy this day… Pangie xx Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 9/29/2022 11:26:00 AM Lovely haikus Anne, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 9/29/2022 10:39:00 AM Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your POTD! Your spirit just sings through your haiku lines as you revel in the autumn season. "Beauty in fading nature" indeed! Sending your blessings of warmth and beauty and many hugs! Login to Reply

Jim Slaughter Date: 9/29/2022 9:57:00 AM There is indeed "beauty in fading nature". Congrats on POTD, S S. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 9/29/2022 9:40:00 AM Congratulations on being awarded POTD, which you have certainly earned! Lovely haikus, Anne-Lise. Enjoy your honor Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 9/29/2022 8:45:00 AM Lovely haikus, Anne-Lise. I'm not a fan of this time of the year, but that still enjoy a good poem! Login to Reply

Warren Doll Date: 9/29/2022 7:09:00 AM Anne=Lise, great haiku! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved, ~ Warren Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2022 7:16:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Warren :) - hugs

Susan Lawrence Date: 9/29/2022 6:33:00 AM I love the detail in this Anne-Lise . You took me right into the scene. Beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD! Hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2022 7:15:00 AM - Thanks for the comment and congratulations, Susan - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/29/2022 5:53:00 AM Warmest congratulations on your POTD, my dearest, Anne-Lise! Be blessed! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2022 5:58:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, my friend :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/29/2022 5:43:00 AM Terrific Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your honor of POTD :) Linda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2022 5:47:00 AM - Glad you liked it, thanks Linda :) - hugs

Beata Agustin Date: 9/29/2022 5:36:00 AM Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing. God bless you. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2022 5:46:00 AM - Thanks, Beata :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/29/2022 5:33:00 AM 'Hands deep in pockets' ... 'Sleeping by the fire.' ... 'Tis that season again, just around the bend. Beautiful haikus, Anne-Lise! And congrats on POTD! Peace and Light, Gershon Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2022 5:44:00 AM - September is autumn here ... after a bad summer ... we have had a lovely autumn - Thanks for the comment and congratulations, Gershon - hugs

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