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the mood is autumn greedy wind makes cold bare trees - hands deep in pocket the leaf veins are dry beauty in fading nature - sleeping by the fire 28.09.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved howmanysyllables.com 5-7-5 Poem of the Day : 29.09.2022

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Date: 10/1/2022 10:13:00 AM
love that first one with "hands in pocket" line!!! Great job
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Date: 10/1/2022 10:13:00 AM
I see it's a POTD. Congrats for that.
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Date: 10/1/2022 5:29:00 AM
Anne-Lise. a belated congratulations on your POTD, Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 9/30/2022 1:42:00 PM
I remember the warm fireplace on autumn and winter eves. I enjoyed reading this one which brought back memories of the past. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 9/30/2022 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/30/2022 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations Dear Anne-lise this was so wonderful to read. I love this Haiku of yours. Big Congratulations on receiving Poem Of The Day it is a great honor to do so and you deserve such an honor with this delighful Poetry of yours. God bless you...
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Date: 9/30/2022 5:19:00 AM
Great haiku and eye catching image. Congratulations Smile, on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 9/30/2022 3:35:00 AM
Fits the mood perfectly, dear. I loved reading your haiku! The imagery is great!Thank you so much for your visit to my work.
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Date: 9/29/2022 4:12:00 PM
Great haiku. Every line is a stunning statement in itself. Dry leaf veins, greedy wind, well, all of them. Not only talent, but presence. Elizabeth
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Date: 9/29/2022 4:09:00 PM
Yes, I agree... "the mood is autumn." Leaves are changing into vibrant colors and the "wind makes cold bare trees." This time of year is beautiful, festive and beyond captivating. You have created a Masterpiece with your words. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/29/2022 1:57:00 PM
Excellent haiku! Congrats on POTD, Sunshine Smile! Janice
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Date: 9/29/2022 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 9/29/2022 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations Sunshine for such a well deserved POTD…the beauty and reality of Autumn described beautifully…..Debx
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Date: 9/29/2022 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise!! My fav line was..,”hands in pockets!” So true!! Enjoy this day… Pangie xx
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Date: 9/29/2022 11:26:00 AM
Lovely haikus Anne, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 9/29/2022 10:39:00 AM
Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your POTD! Your spirit just sings through your haiku lines as you revel in the autumn season. "Beauty in fading nature" indeed! Sending your blessings of warmth and beauty and many hugs!
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Date: 9/29/2022 9:57:00 AM
There is indeed "beauty in fading nature". Congrats on POTD, S S.
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Date: 9/29/2022 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on being awarded POTD, which you have certainly earned! Lovely haikus, Anne-Lise. Enjoy your honor
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Date: 9/29/2022 8:45:00 AM
Lovely haikus, Anne-Lise. I'm not a fan of this time of the year, but that still enjoy a good poem!
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Date: 9/29/2022 7:09:00 AM
Anne=Lise, great haiku! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved, ~ Warren
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Date: 9/29/2022 7:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Warren :) - hugs
Date: 9/29/2022 6:33:00 AM
I love the detail in this Anne-Lise . You took me right into the scene. Beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 9/29/2022 7:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the comment and congratulations, Susan - hugs
Date: 9/29/2022 5:53:00 AM
Warmest congratulations on your POTD, my dearest, Anne-Lise! Be blessed!
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Date: 9/29/2022 5:58:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, my friend :) - hugs
Date: 9/29/2022 5:43:00 AM
Terrific Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your honor of POTD :) Linda
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Date: 9/29/2022 5:47:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, thanks Linda :) - hugs
Date: 9/29/2022 5:36:00 AM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing. God bless you.
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Date: 9/29/2022 5:46:00 AM
- Thanks, Beata :) - hugs
Date: 9/29/2022 5:33:00 AM
'Hands deep in pockets' ... 'Sleeping by the fire.' ... 'Tis that season again, just around the bend. Beautiful haikus, Anne-Lise! And congrats on POTD! Peace and Light, Gershon
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Date: 9/29/2022 5:44:00 AM
- September is autumn here ... after a bad summer ... we have had a lovely autumn - Thanks for the comment and congratulations, Gershon - hugs
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