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the mood is autumn greedy wind makes cold bare trees - hands deep in pocket the leaf veins are dry beauty in fading nature - sleeping by the fire 28.09.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved howmanysyllables.com 5-7-5 Poem of the Day : 29.09.2022

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2022 10:13:00 AM

love that first one with "hands in pocket" line!!! Great job

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2022 10:13:00 AM

I see it's a POTD. Congrats for that.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/1/2022 5:29:00 AM

Anne-Lise. a belated congratulations on your POTD, Happy Saturday xxoo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2022 1:42:00 PM

I remember the warm fireplace on autumn and winter eves. I enjoyed reading this one which brought back memories of the past. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2022 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/30/2022 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations Dear Anne-lise this was so wonderful to read. I love this Haiku of yours. Big Congratulations on receiving Poem Of The Day it is a great honor to do so and you deserve such an honor with this delighful Poetry of yours. God bless you...

Valsa George

Date: 9/30/2022 5:19:00 AM

Great haiku and eye catching image. Congratulations Smile, on your well deserved POTD

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/30/2022 3:35:00 AM

Fits the mood perfectly, dear. I loved reading your haiku! The imagery is great!Thank you so much for your visit to my work.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/29/2022 4:12:00 PM

Great haiku. Every line is a stunning statement in itself. Dry leaf veins, greedy wind, well, all of them. Not only talent, but presence. Elizabeth

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/29/2022 4:09:00 PM

Yes, I agree... "the mood is autumn." Leaves are changing into vibrant colors and the "wind makes cold bare trees." This time of year is beautiful, festive and beyond captivating. You have created a Masterpiece with your words. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/29/2022 1:57:00 PM

Excellent haiku! Congrats on POTD, Sunshine Smile! Janice

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2022 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD

Deb M

Date: 9/29/2022 1:42:00 PM

Congratulations Sunshine for such a well deserved POTD…the beauty and reality of Autumn described beautifully…..Debx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/29/2022 1:28:00 PM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise!! My fav line was..,”hands in pockets!” So true!! Enjoy this day… Pangie xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/29/2022 11:26:00 AM

Lovely haikus Anne, Congrats on POTD

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/29/2022 10:39:00 AM

Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your POTD! Your spirit just sings through your haiku lines as you revel in the autumn season. "Beauty in fading nature" indeed! Sending your blessings of warmth and beauty and many hugs!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 9/29/2022 9:57:00 AM

There is indeed "beauty in fading nature". Congrats on POTD, S S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2022 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations on being awarded POTD, which you have certainly earned! Lovely haikus, Anne-Lise. Enjoy your honor

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/29/2022 8:45:00 AM

Lovely haikus, Anne-Lise. I'm not a fan of this time of the year, but that still enjoy a good poem!

Warren Doll

Date: 9/29/2022 7:09:00 AM

Anne=Lise, great haiku! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved, ~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 7:16:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Warren :) - hugs

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/29/2022 6:33:00 AM

I love the detail in this Anne-Lise . You took me right into the scene. Beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD! Hugs, Susan :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 7:15:00 AM

- Thanks for the comment and congratulations, Susan - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/29/2022 5:53:00 AM

Warmest congratulations on your POTD, my dearest, Anne-Lise! Be blessed!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 5:58:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, my friend :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/29/2022 5:43:00 AM

Terrific Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your honor of POTD :) Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 5:47:00 AM

- Glad you liked it, thanks Linda :) - hugs

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/29/2022 5:36:00 AM

Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 5:46:00 AM

- Thanks, Beata :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/29/2022 5:33:00 AM

'Hands deep in pockets' ... 'Sleeping by the fire.' ... 'Tis that season again, just around the bend. Beautiful haikus, Anne-Lise! And congrats on POTD! Peace and Light, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2022 5:44:00 AM

- September is autumn here ... after a bad summer ... we have had a lovely autumn - Thanks for the comment and congratulations, Gershon - hugs