On negotiating with my dissociative identity disorder

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People at work come across so different when you run into them outside of work.


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I met the new soul I was due to become, 
This morning, around about two.
He was beginning to redesign my thoughts, 
He was going to make me feel new,

When I thought, hang on, I haven’t finished 
Creating and being all that is me,
I haven’t finished building everything 
That is fun and friendly and free.

So we had a discussion about 
A time share throughout the year;
I could be the weekend painter, 
While he could be the career.

This morning my new soul and I started 
A great work/rest time plan,
Just the two of our souls living together
Sharing this one single man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/8/2017 2:30:00 AM
A different take on the contest. Well done with this interesting composition. Congrats!! Regs Sunita
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:13:00 PM
Aww I love this Lewis! A truly great take on the theme. I enjoyed it with a smile. Congrats on your placement. :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:13:00 PM
This really out of the box! Two souls with two soles! Really clever Lewis! Congratulations on your great placement! : )
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:48:00 PM
I see where this poem may have come from! Enjoyed it! -- Dean
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Date: 8/7/2017 1:49:00 PM
Lewis, this one ran me around in circles and .... well...
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Date: 8/7/2017 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much John, I'm glad you appreciate the idea of a split soul wearing different shoes, thanks
Date: 7/17/2017 12:16:00 PM
Nice one!
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Date: 7/23/2017 10:32:00 PM
Thanks Maureen