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On Negotiating With My Dissociative Identity Disorder

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People at work come across so different when you run into them outside of work.

I met the new soul I was due to become, This morning, around about two. He was beginning to redesign my thoughts, He was going to make me feel new, When I thought, hang on, I haven’t finished Creating and being all that is me, I haven’t finished building everything That is fun and friendly and free. So we had a discussion about A time share throughout the year; I could be the weekend painter, While he could be the career. This morning my new soul and I started A great work/rest time plan, Just the two of our souls living together Sharing this one single man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/8/2017 2:30:00 AM
A different take on the contest. Well done with this interesting composition. Congrats!! Regs Sunita
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:13:00 PM
Aww I love this Lewis! A truly great take on the theme. I enjoyed it with a smile. Congrats on your placement. :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:13:00 PM
This really out of the box! Two souls with two soles! Really clever Lewis! Congratulations on your great placement! : )
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:48:00 PM
I see where this poem may have come from! Enjoyed it! -- Dean
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Date: 8/7/2017 1:49:00 PM
Lewis, this one ran me around in circles and .... well...
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 8/7/2017 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much John, I'm glad you appreciate the idea of a split soul wearing different shoes, thanks
Date: 7/17/2017 12:16:00 PM
Nice one!
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/23/2017 10:32:00 PM
Thanks Maureen

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