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Oh, I remember... A most painful anniversary. I'll never forget Where I was that fateful September day. I still vividly remember what I was doing And exactly how I felt When I watched in paralyzing horror As the second hijacked plane hit the tower; The cataclysmic impact, Immediate; Depth of heartache and pain, Bottomless. I knew America was under terrorist attack. The imagery of billowing smoke From the gaping hollows Where the planes struck The twin towers, Unforgettable. Watching trapped people Who couldn't withstand the intense heat Plunging to their deaths, Unshakable; Glued to the TV in such shock and disbelief I could barely speak! On that September morning in New York, Thousands of everyday people, Including brave firefighters Woke up, Kissed their families goodbye, Walked out the front door never to return. Their survivors left to deal with The aftermath of their new reality; Yet that awful, tragic day was also a day Of courage and resilience. Heroes made the last moments of their lives count Aboard Flight 77; an impending attack On the Pentagon, they thwarted. Terrorists tried to divide us that day. They failed spectacularly. From the ashes, America rose like Phoenix, Still united. 21 years later, The pain is still fresh every anniversary. The memory is eternally vivid. The world hasn't forgotten. We Americans haven't forgotten. We will never forget. Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date submitted: 12/03/2022 N/A in Remember September Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Contest Judged: 9/23/2022 8:14:00 PM Date written: 09/11/2022

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Date: 12/17/2022 5:00:00 PM
Dear Edward, your eloquent poem is powerful and poignant. An American tragedy never to be forgotten. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/17/2022 7:55:00 PM
Coming from such a great poet like yourself, it really means a lot! Thank you very much, Susan:-) Happy holidays!
Date: 12/9/2022 12:16:00 AM
I too had seen that most horrifying spectacle the very moment it happened. I remember it triggered sparks of fear and horror in the hearts of everyone in the family. You have brought the entire scene before our eyes in vivid detail through your wonderful poem. Congratulations Edward on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/10/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much for the visit, comments and congrats, Valsa:-)
Date: 12/8/2022 5:03:00 AM
Edward, impressive, intense and meaningful. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance, well done, I love your poem and image/quote, On September 11 that year I buried a fav uncle and my niece was born, blessings
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Date: 12/8/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for sharing, Constance:-) I appreciate the congrats and my placement! Most obliged.
Date: 12/6/2022 11:04:00 AM
Edward, I was walking my dog and a neighbor said go turn on your TV we are under attack. I wrote a poem commemorating the 20th anniversary. We were all one that day. It took our own people to tear us apart. Your poem says what most of us were feeling. Congratulations on your win! 1
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Date: 12/7/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visit, congrats, and sharing your 9-11 experience, Ann. I'd love to read your commemoration poem!
Date: 12/6/2022 8:07:00 AM
We were changing classes at my school, where I taught high-school English, when I found out. The rest of the day was a blur! Edward, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win with this moving and expressive poem! Janice
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Date: 12/7/2022 2:12:00 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and sharing your experience of that awful day, Janice. I was mowing the lawn when I was called in to watch smoke billowing from one of the twin towers. Harrowing!
Date: 9/11/2022 11:59:00 PM
Brilliant writing Edward, I was in Spain when it was on TV and not understanding Spanish at first thought it was a terrible accident, as we went into town the. Newsfeed was in English and realised it was an act of terrorism. I'll never forget it, may those scum burn in hell. Tom
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Date: 9/12/2022 5:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-) ..."may those scum burn in hell'"...From your lips to God's ears!
Date: 9/11/2022 3:14:00 PM
A winner, for sure, Edward. I haven't read a better, more well-written poem about this tragedy. Worthy of P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 9/11/2022 5:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)

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