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68 Year Old Coming Through

Make way on the street, 68-year-old coming through, So, shift your feet, Or make room for me to get through. I am not blaming you, But at half my age, There seems to be something lacking in you, If you can't match someone twice your age, Who likes to take a walk down the street, So either shift your feet, Or show some manners and let me through.

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Date: 8/16/2022 6:54:00 PM
Society, some, have no manners when it comes to age. I know that at 71, I am getting very vocally opinionated to rudeness out in public. Blessings to you and yours
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David Smith
Date: 8/17/2022 12:49:00 AM
I just can't understand how slow some of the younger ones are at walking. But then I suppose I have had a lot more practice than some. We are all fine. All the younger members of family including my 3 year old grandson have had Covid but my wife and I have missed out. Regards David in NZ

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