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600 Degrees of Separation

An old gentleman on a deserted country road just outside a picturesque small town, strolling in my direction. He smiles as we pass each other, says, “How are you?”, walks on. I return the greeting, thinking, “Nice people here.” An old gentleman on a bustling city sidewalk, strolling in my direction. He smiles as we pass each other, says, “How are you?”, walks on. With a quick backward glance and a self-conscious half-smile frozen on my face, I’m thinking, “Do I know this guy?” “What does he want?” “Another weirdo.” Humanity has a way of crowding out humanity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/23/2018 2:04:00 AM
Wow, what can I say that Susan hasn't already said, but that I concur with all she said! A tale to tell, you tell it well, enthusing this comment from me, write on Bernard, write on! Best forever wishes... Mick
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/23/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Mick!
Date: 1/22/2018 10:00:00 PM
Wow! The beautiful art of story telling is alive and doing very well on Bernard's poetry page! :)) What a captivating and insightful write with a deep and intriguing message. Your last three lines are wonderfully ingenious. I do love the way you tell a story my friend. An excellent write! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/22/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!! :)

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