5-16-72 Number 1

With all the world to see, Will you watch it with me ? Or will you sit And let me go To watch it all alone ?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 8:19:00 PM

I like this. What do the numbers mean?

Wm Paul
Date: 6/24/2012 11:06:00 AM

The numbers here are the date the poem was written.

David Williams

Date: 6/9/2012 4:00:00 PM

Wm, hope you are not alone....David

Wm Paul
Date: 6/24/2012 11:08:00 AM

I am now happily married, have been for 20 plus years, and always had people I care about around me, I had/have friends, but was maybe searching at the time

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2012 11:11:00 AM

Happiness in life is to be two...hope she will stay. - Well written Wm. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Wm Paul
Date: 6/24/2012 11:08:00 AM

I'm good now