4,600 Insignificant Deaths

Your words are knives
And I have no more
Smiles to cover the 
Scars.
Hollow eyes stare 
Ahead at a crippled
Future.
Veins full with the
Poison of self-hatred
Pump to your  
Heart.
A life wasted on
The horrors of the world.
A test subject born
To lose.
Added to the number 
Of how many 
Have failed. 
An insignificant death.
4,600
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 1:32 AM
Very powerful!
Struthers Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Thanks!(:
Flint Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 9:04 PM
How sad, but very well written. An excellent poem. A 7.
Struthers Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Thank you very much!
Fox Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Er ! 4,6001.6 and a half n a bit of a quarter !
Struthers Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Haha I am corrected!
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