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_____ forgiveness awaits like an old memory, draped- love stands motionless... from the twilight sky where purple strands search alone- forgiveness finds peace... two young souls, searching in a song of forgiveness- pluck a weeping rose ___________ 08/20/2016

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Date: 8/23/2016 12:48:00 PM
Rick,this is a rare one in its beauty and impact!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:13:00 AM
'A song of forgiveness plucking a weeping rose'. That I like. Congratulations, Kai.
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Rick! I can tell you understand the form...not many do. So happy to see this get a top placement! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/21/2016 4:51:00 PM
Rick, this is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Sandra
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful, my favorite. Congratulations Rick...
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:13:00 PM
Very "poetic" with great lines. You have written a lovely poem Rick.
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Date: 8/21/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/21/2016 10:34:00 AM
Rick, I knew this was a winner right away! I love when poems have the word "twilight" in it. Beautiful and moving and I love the last line...congrats on your top win and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Rick Parise
Date: 8/21/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank You ,LL /// ENJOYED!!!! LOVE & LIGHT

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