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1980 Our Year In Love

The depth of our love has an infinite range,
as I reminisce on the day that we met.
I will always remember your deepest voice,
a mellifluous sound I will never forget. 

You caught me off guard, while working my flight.
In a three piece suit, a tall Adonis you were,
as you bowed your head to enter the door,
I had no idea what next would occur.

When I served you white wine, I asked if you sing.
You smiled and replied “only in the shower”.
It was late at night, and the flight was long. . .
You came to the bar and we spoke for an hour.

You shared with me your love of surfing the waves,
and working at the shipyard at Pearl Harbor.
We both felt the chemistry of love’s sparks fly,
and I could barely contain my joyful ardor.

The drone of the engines made it hard to hear
so we spoke with a nearness that captured delight.
Your scent took my breath in a heavenly way,
and we hated to see the end of our flight.

You took my hotel number and promised to call.
You kept that promise when home you returned.
Soon our whirlwind romance began to aspire.
In my heart, in my thoughts, that flame always burned.

It was not long until this isle I called home,
and I have never regretted a moment with you.
Life with you quite a challenge, but oh. . . so divine.
You still make sparks fly in sweet things that you do! 

8-28-16

*Note: We have been married for 34 years now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 2:35 PM
How fitting I chose to read this when your words of love for your husband as you celebrated your 35th Anniversary last year are still so fresh to me. So this is how it all began for you Connie :-) Your words radiate wondrous light, I feel you smiling, giggling too, at the cherished memory. One never forgets 'that moment', you penned it exquisitely and give me hope that it really is possible. Beautiful writing from your heart. A privilege that you share. thank you :-) lynnxxx
Breedt Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Omg. Love was in the air? So well articulated that it draws onê in to want to know more. Now you get serenaded by Bach in the sheets. Ok . I get it ha ha
Van Der Merwe Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Beautiful and romantic - congratulations on your win and here's to another 34 years + Mark
Rycroft Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Congrats well done x
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 6:07 PM
This is wonderful, Connie, good romantic poem, Congratulations on your placement
Krampe Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:58 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful love story. Congratulations, Connie.
Haight Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:55 PM
So wonderful to learn about your wonderful love story, Connie, and beautifully you express it in your lovely poem. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:55 PM
A 7 for this lovely poem, telling a story just as lovely. Congrats on your win, Connie! Janice
Walker Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Connie, wow, what a love story and it takes place in beautiful Hawaii! Congratulations on your placement. Sonia
Richards Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:29 PM
What a sweet and tender memory, and such a lovely tribute to a lasting love! Congratulations on your beautiful marriage, Connie, and your win! (Meant In more than one way!!)
Negron Flores Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations Connie on the placement of the contest.
Austin Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Ah - love at 30,000 feet. The air is rare up there, perfect place for lovers to share. Oh, shut up, Austin. This is wonderful, Connie. Love, daver
Delaney Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Connie: I knew this was a winner. SuZ
Haight Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Beautifully written and so romantic, Connie. Congratulations on your Second Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Back to say congratulations, Connie, on your prize winning write. You deserve it. Peace my friend:)
Scars Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Connie, congrats on you placement in the contest! This is truly beautiful! -luloo
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 8:09 AM
A lovely write and poem, Connie. Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
Lane Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:34 AM
What a lovely and romantic story, Connie. Sometimes you just know, and when you both do...it was meant to be. Congratulations.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:37 AM
My second place, I like the rhyming flow of your lines, the gentle way you brought as you narrate your love story… =`) I enjoyed the 2nd stanza I really thought that's cute, it made me smile.. =`) You bring me in there… I'm loving it through as I am reading.. =`) Weee my belated Happy Valentines..! =`)BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Thank you so much Olive. Now our children have a poem of how we met and got together. I was so happy you liked my poem enough to place it so high. Hugs, Connie
Pinet Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Good story, good poem. It flows well and holds your interest from start to finish. This poem comes alive within the reader's heart as this romantic story unfolds gently before them and ends on a note of love. Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:11 PM
That is my true story of how I met my husband Emile. I took some time to make it rhyme. Thanks very much. Connie ; )
Gasun Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 8:28 AM
This is such a beautiful poem about your love and marriage life my dear friend, Connie. I'm so happy for you. May you continue to be happy together forever! Happy Valentines Day to you and yours! love lots and big hugs Leonora
Vaso Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 12:23 AM
OK for you and hubby, the best hits for 1980! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EwaRvALFRcQ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fFnOfpIJL0M https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9F-6S6FrgUk https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x1FRz6mcJyI https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6QBaZHltJw https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DnkHf069fvA https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zO6D_BAuYCI https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ry4ngf766N0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xF77Y1JLScc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cZiq84hM74g
Vaso Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 12:08 AM
This is so beautiful, not only the poem but your love, next post, I hope you enjoy! brb!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Thank you so much for the list of youtube songs. I enjoyed them Arthur. It was so nice of you. Hugs, Connie
Laurie Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Hello Connie ... beautifully written and a wonderful love story. Enjoy Valentine's Day - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:32 AM
Thank you Lindsay. You have a great Valentine's Day too! ; )
Hicks Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 1:54 PM
What an awesome "where did you meet" story! Thousands of feet above the sky, falling in love with a strange just passing by. Congrats on the long marriage! My parents have been together for 37 years now ... crazy. Isn't it funny how you can share your life-story so easily with a random stranger on a plane? I guess it's always assuming you're never gonna meet the same person again!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 12:31 AM
Thank you very much Tim. I fully intended to see him again. Our attraction was mutual. Usually work was work untill I met my husband. Needless to say, he was my favorite passenger! ; )
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