Adrienne Gresham Poet Light Verse

12 Commas

I saw your name, I started to smile
Turning left now, only two more miles
My toes were wiggling, at the thought of you
Sipping, squishing, tasting your delight
You're disappearing slowly, out of sight
Your name is intoxicating, so is your taste
You're to be sipped, not gulped down in haste
Pulling up, parking, taking out the key
Happy are my lips, hips, and ooh-my tummy

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Robert Pettit February 15, 2012 at 8:19 PM Congratulations on your win. This is a decently written poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 14, 2012 at 5:40 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Tons Of Comma Fun" contest Adrienne. Love, Carol

Samual Ronthorpe February 13, 2012 at 8:27 AM Great work. Congratulations on your 5th place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 2:16 AM ADRIENNE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

Joyce Johnson February 11, 2012 at 12:00 PM What a fun piece. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor February 11, 2012 at 8:29 AM Congrats, Adrienne. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. hugs Ralph

Harry Horsman February 11, 2012 at 3:29 AM congrats, enjoyed this awesome winner. harry

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2012 at 5:36 PM Very descriptive and expressive work that is in the winners' cirlce..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Congrats on your winning work..Sara