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I am a robot/hybrid scientist Observing your planet every one hundred years I have noted your city states become kingdoms And then your kingdoms develop to become empires I've seen your flags gleam with shimmering pride Recently overshadowed by the banner of technology It appears you have no resistance to assimilation Now more and more you depend upon machines I have noted that you trust in your computers Far more than you will ever trust in each other And now your empire has become a technocracy Inevitably each of you has become only a number I am making a notation for the next time I pass Is this inevitably the way it always has to be? See, I’ve heard my ancestors used to love one another And now I wonder if you will become as lonely as me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/26/2012 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Such imaginative imagery!
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 9:19:00 AM
Wow David an intense write and reminds me of The Day The Earth Stood Still with Klatu and the Robot who was more powerful than human... luv your last line too... appreciate your sweet critique on my work luv..
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:44:00 AM
And thanks for stopping by my poems. I welcome your comments, David
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:41:00 AM
Very creative write on the present day picture of our globe, David
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Date: 4/29/2011 10:36:00 PM
Awesome, just awesome.....and all this from a robot.... equiped with a memory. How interesting! :) And a creative way to make your point across. Well done! Thanks for sharing and thank you for reading my poems and for the kind comments. Caroline
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