03-03-2011

spring sulks, gathers strength moody March meanders through- winter wanes, sun smiles

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 6:49:00 AM

Great personification, Barbara!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 8:18:00 PM

Indeed, March is a moody, sulky month. The worst of winter is now behind us, dear LNC. I hope the sun plants a smile on your face. Winter is actually the best time of year in Florida. Excellent alliteration and a great description of waning winter. Best wishes in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 11:05:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Barbara. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol