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....A Leaf In the Wind

a leaf in the wind driven by forces unseen just as we all are

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Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 5:58:00 PM

nice and i like the feelng of the nature here Jim, have agood one*luv~SKAT

Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/15/2010 3:30:00 PM

Man this is so powerful and deep! That philosophical vibe really works for you. I love thought inspiring works of greatness and you exude them with each piece. And I play keyboard by ear, not well....but thanks for the words. I think my song would be great as a Lifehouse or matchbox twenty sound. But who knows... Thanks! Later

Susan Palli

Date: 9/8/2010 9:57:00 AM

excellent!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/31/2010 6:55:00 PM

sure feels like that sometimes Jim. nice Haiku and BG is right.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/31/2010 12:30:00 PM

This is great...it also fits into the senryu category..BG