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....A Leaf In the Wind

a leaf in the wind
driven by forces unseen 
just as we all are

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Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 5:58 PM

nice and i like the feelng of the nature here Jim, have agood one*luv~SKAT

Audonus Taylor

November 15, 2010 at 3:30 PM

Man this is so powerful and deep! That philosophical vibe really works for you. I love thought inspiring works of greatness and you exude them with each piece. And I play keyboard by ear, not well....but thanks for the words. I think my song would be great as a Lifehouse or matchbox twenty sound. But who knows... Thanks! Later