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Dedicated to Dana (i will change the title when i find a good one, in the mean time try giving me some ides please) i know you have fallen i know your hurt but i want you to see the bright side dont let all this pain drag you down it will only ensure your demise so please believe with me you are strong you can make it people may say that the power of darkness is way to great but i say if you can live and love then the darkness cant have won it's only as strong as you let it be so please don't leave me be you will only be hurting me and your family ask yourself constantly is this what i want to be? is this what it has come to? i know this is one lowsy poem but i hope you can see the message and heart i put into these rythem and rhymes

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Date: 11/18/2014 2:11:00 PM
Good poem, Jordan. Your emotion is strong and sincere :) eve
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