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                                    - My poem number: One thousand -
               When I posted my first poem in 2011 - my goal was 100 poems
   Thanks to all who read my poems, without YOUR comment my poems would die

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- You Know What I Mean When I Say Homesick -

A child is born
  a little life it's a miracle
  Death is nothing to fear
  but feels like
  autumn leaves on cold snow

  Brothers
  is not
  like night and day
  or
  the sun and the moon
  They are seeds from
  life and love

  Sisters
  is like
  flowers
  with different fragrance
  and color
  But they have the roots
  from the same garden

  Family
  several generations
  their lives together
  complicated
  or uncomplicated
  Grandmother's garden ...
  with homesickness

  Life reflects
  and caught the light,
  radiance and hope
  in old memories







22.11.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:51:00 PM
For all of us homesick might be individualized, but you are right as per usual. You understand what is important. I think about this more and more. What a beautiful and optimistic poem you have written.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:56:00 AM
- Thank you, Duke :) - I appreciate you reading and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/25/2018 12:17:00 AM
Beautiful Garden, beautiful words, fond memories and the cherry on top number 1000 poems! A great accomplishment Sunshine Smile your poems always shine and poetry readers cannot help but follow the trail of light you leave for them to follow! I know they do for me! Well done, xoxo, Jennifer.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:55:00 AM
- Many thanks, for friendly visits and lovely comment Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2018 1:55:00 PM
Indeed... I love your garden, my dear Anne Lise...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:51:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2018 10:58:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece of poetry Anne-Lise. Poem 1000 shines bright. From your first you have written from the heart sharing your heart and thoughts within the soup. Memories sing out moments within our lives. Your words sing as they shall ever do. Hears to another thousand Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/24/2018 9:46:00 AM
In these past 7 years you have planted many lovely flowers, such as this one, in your poetry garden, Anne-Lise! May your pen never run dry! Hugs // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2018 10:19:00 AM
Such a lovely poem. This is the time of year memories, good and bad, all run together.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2018 5:49:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2018 6:48:00 AM
Another wonderful poem. Anne-Lise. Wow, 1000th just awesome. Keep up the great work...hugs // Charlie :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2018 7:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 4:50:00 PM
Sun, a thousand beautiful poems, congratulations, and this last one is a beauty too, well done as usual ~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2018 6:37:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 4:18:00 PM
a thousand poems all so special that you need to publish a book, anne... weeds and all, a beautiful read.. happy huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2018 6:34:00 AM
- No, there will be no book :) - Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 3:53:00 PM
1000 wonderful poems, you say without soup your poems would die. i say each one of us, our lives, would be a little less rich, without you.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2018 6:36:00 AM
- You are so kind ... thank you for the beautiful words, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 3:25:00 PM
this is very lovely, Anne Lise and I join Jan in saying congrats for your 1,000th poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2018 6:32:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 9:59:00 AM
made me smile Anne-Lise congrats on your 1000th poem... sadly some of us end up with weeds in our family garden:-( hugs Jan x
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 12:22:00 PM
- Yes, there are weeds in all gardens Jan - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 9:50:00 AM
Big congratulations Sunshine on your great achievement, I'm just over a 100 now lol. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 12:56:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 8:32:00 AM
this is lovely, anne-lise! congratulations on your thousandth poem! i also thought i'd write a poem a day for a year and it's been over 10 years for me!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 12:59:00 PM
- Time flies and the years go by, Ilene :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely 1000th poem, Anne-lise:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 12:57:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 7:27:00 AM
Congrats on the 1000th poem Anne-Lise..you chose a great one for this occasion..honoring relationships and family.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 12:57:00 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 4:53:00 AM
What an uplifting and profound poem dearest, Anne-Lise! It is a gem! Hugs xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 6:30:00 AM
- Thank you, Demetrios :) - I appreciate you reading and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2018 4:50:00 AM
beautiful poetic expression on HOMESICK
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2018 6:29:00 AM
- Thank you, Mahtab :) - I appreciate you reading and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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